All Comments on 'Bought'

Delicious! Lovely story...well written..most enjoyable - thank you!

If she had more interaction or it was a 1st person pov by him it would be spectacular. I cant get into it because it sounds like someone described a memory of a fantasy they once had. There is something here. Seriously, something amazing just under the surface of this story. Do not be afraid of your voice. Add more depth and development to your central characters and then contact me. I would be interested in publishing this. There is a story on here called security binds her. It's not one of mine but it is Damn good and a perfect example of what I am referring to as "developing characters" or if you have a kindle Indebted part 1 is similar to your story line and might prove to be inspiring. Good luck this shows great talent. Xoxo love and hostages MALICEON BOOKS

Virgin enjoys getting raped? You had me until she started to really enjoy it.

Good story up until that point IMO. Keep writing!

Even for fiction. Like a previous commentator said - Virgin enjoys getting raped? Stupidity runs amok. A truly horrible story not worth the time spent reading it. No stars.

Lots of girls have rape fantasies...even those of us that are virgins. It's plausible.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. ;)

I love stories like this, and you didn't disappoint. I hope there is more to come. :)

Great story! Please continue it!