All Comments on 'Bound By Your Promise'

by pulse8

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mercianknightmercianknightover 12 years ago
Fabulous tale

Well written, very erotic, and I look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
SSC Always meet in a public place

The character very much ignored all red flags, warnings and any common sense. No safe, sane nor very consensual when you are married and plan on meeting a guy on the side with promises... then go into the countryside in HIS car no less. Very dumb.

Makes the reader wonder how very loose she is and will her husband notice? She'll be getting fisted regularly, lol!

Belladonna1994Belladonna1994over 2 years ago

I don’t like how you used you like you did this or you did that you said this or you said That I like he she you, to me that’s not completely well written it’s make more since and sounds better if you used he did this or he said this or that etc… but other than that good story lube

ForestgodlingForestgodlingabout 2 years ago

Nice kink, sad to see it was your only submission. I had a bit of trouble with the geometry of the last bit, seems like the arm would be in the way...otherwise, greatly enjoyed

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