All Comments on 'Bound For My Daddy'

I am an admirer of your fabulous writing and enjoyed reading this excellent father/daughter incest tale. Hope to read more. Thanks

Be cool to read more to the story. Maybe part two of the daughter cuckold the mother and taking over the household sexually. Or getting revenge on her sisters.

Really liked your story; will there be more forthcoming as this sets the scene for a further telling.

Love the setup, the relationship of characters, and the bondage, Love The Bondage. But towards the end, I didn't like how she and he turned so dirty.

This is just my preference, but affected my view of the story.

Nonetheless, it was well written. And a very hot read.

Thank You

Great story, loved it, very erotic. I agree with the other guy. Maybe the pair could cukhold mom. Maybe dad could punish the sisters with his daughters help, and maybe he could get his daughter to help him seduce other women he fantasieses bout to. Well done 5*+

love every bit of it :)

Write a follow up where Keri ties up Laurie and Daddy fucks laurie for a little revenge

Chapter Two

As we got out of bed I noticed something that made my blood run cold. The light on my webcam showed it was on...

I like that! Several possibilities. The first of which is that Laurie and Krissy were watching to see what would happen and saw her having sex with her father.....

lot of potential, thanks!

That twas fucking hot as hell. My pussy is dripping wet. Thanks

I love your detail and it got me all wet. I really loved it!

I agree I think another chapter would be interesting. The web cam twist is close to genius.

Your story was great! Your daddy/daughter tale got me off twice in one session. Which isn't too bad. I usually like them more gentle, but it was still really well written. Five cums all together before bed! This girl is ready to make some Zs! Thanks again and keep up the quality work :D

it was so very hot! My pussy is dripping.. Plz write another part to this story..

I hope the next they play she ties him up and spanks his ass long and hard until it's all red and sore! This story got me dripping all over the place!

I have some things in my past with a lady I knew that gives me problems now with the father/ daughter set up, but that has nothing to do with your ability to write a very good story. I gave you a five, with only one very minor critique 'Southern Comfort' in the first paragraph.

Liked the Web cam angle. Good idea. Have her cell phone ring though. She picks it up and it's Laurie. Tells her to look at the computer, then she sees the web cam light.

Blackmail time.

"Tell your... Daddy...we will be calling. Soon." cut to evil laughter among a group of girls.

Damn, I'm already wanting to read this.

M.S.Tarot

Great story! I really enjoyed it :-) my daddy and I just got back together and I love when he restrains me and imposes his will on me.

You are a bad bad man LC,, that why all us pervert never miss one of your stories,, after this one it's very clear you need to write a lot more Daddy/Daughter stories,,, as good as any other Daddy/Daughter story on LIT. and way better then most,,,and be sure to thank Mrs LC for her help and inspiration,,

I love Father/Daughter stories, be there done that. Only thing was my daughter and her life long girlfriend seduced me, lasted until they both got married. Didn't feel the same after they had kids. Fun while it lasted. Keep up the good work.

to this story. Fantastic.

Love it

So Hot and very well written . Will look out for more stories from you.

So Daddy goes to jail and ends up divorced - that's a given. Never join that Sorority because those girls have shown themselves to be true bitches and not "sister" worthy.

Of course they'll need a little revenge but they've shown themselves to be not to bright (did they spend some time in jail for their abuse?) so that will be easy. Otherwise this little tale was a waste of time.

But the anon who goes bitching about realism, there is only one rule to fiction, it doesn't have to be realistic.

Crap, just remembered, no daughter.

HEY Crook if you want real buy a bloody newspaper

Best erotic story I've ever read. Mmmmmmm

really good story loved it.. you should continue it

The story is somewhat more than on the physical side, with hardly any mutual respect in any given quarter! It's mostly pure raw, down and dirty, lurid sex; lust and wantonness abounds! No aspects of the physicality was there any display of wanting to pleasure or please their rut-partner!

Keri's father, once he started to literally take her sexually, his physical, emotional and sexual lusts started driving him from wantonness, lust and animal urges to more forceful, physical domination and building him into a blooming, raving maniac. The man lost control of his faculties and his mind.

The story is written very well, in an evident professional style and manner. The character's are all well tuned and played their assigned puppet roles--ala the writings of the author--extremely well. The dialogue, and especially the banter of the young ladies from the beginning all the way through binding Keri and leaving her tied to her bed for one of her parents to find her!! The theme is good, as is the plot. The story carries a graphic and visual punch to it that displays images realistically!!

I really enjoyed this. I was tired of reading how the daughter always had to entice the dad. Nice to read a story about how the dad decided he was making the move and the daughter ended up loving it. I would like to read more stories on this same story line.

After masturbating to Daddy likes it rough I decided to read this for fun. It's everything I wish I could do with my husband. Thank you for writing it, and please don't stop.

Signed

Very Satisfied

Great story. Very graphic. Keep writing

I liked it. Nice story-telling. Keep up the good writing 😊

I will definately be looking up your other stories. A similar story to one I am trying to write. Guess I'll have to change mine now I've read this.

Thanks very much I loved it.

I enjoyed the story. In describing it there is not much I can add to your own preamble, which I thought captured the mood of the piece quite well. While I have no particular suggestion on how to go with it, I would like to read a future story where you play with the bondage aspect of the story some more. Is it central to the relationship between Keri and her Dad, does it expand to include such as Keri's friends and family, or is it just one aspect of the play between father and daughter? Good job.

I only wish you had taken it just a little further and had Kerri show off her new car to the other two girls and give them the finger.

The characters, storyline, and dialogue was dull. There was no intensity. No build up. It was all... Oh this is wrong, but two seconds later they were like... No, it's not. This story was boring and entirely forgettable.

"Your mom's a lucky bitch to have that fucking her." Who talks like that? The ironic thing is that you pride yourself on long slow character buildup, which would be great if the characters worked, but the frankly unrealistic and stupid dialogue ruins it. Meanwhile the Daddy daughter sex is totally hot, all on its own. I flipped right over the long intro. Not because Im lazy or only want the dirt, because it was full of unrealistic lines like this. Five stars anyway!

would love to read what happens next with Keri, Laurie, Krissy, and Keri's dad and if Keri gets into the Sorority

Loved the intensity, loved the detail, loved the variety of sex- could easily picture this unfolding. Only thing is I don't see Keri really saving herself for Daddy's exclusive use. she is after all a horny young slut that I suspect wil need much more punishment.

Appreciate the efforts, loved the story. Thanks

This is begging for a part two or at least I am

Your stories just keep getting hotter. Loved it!

Great story for a sequel

please more love it want more please

PLEASE oh god.. please continue this series... so.. amazing.. just wow.

You are talented.

One of the best I've ever read

Loved it, want MORE!!!!!

What a waste of nylons. Daddy should have been more careful, or at least offered to get new nylons... garters... silk panties with matching bustier.

You should seriously make this into a small series or something. I've never been into incest but damn this is way too fucking hot, not to be.

Ugh, put this wasted crap off in the rape/abuse section where it belongs. Pathetic.

A beautiful story, well told and having a full and complete ending. Believable, and at significant junctures very tender. Both Daddy and his little girl got exactly what they wanted, and I hope they can manage to keep fucking each other for a long time to come. Thanx for the story!

Seriously make a series out of this. I want Laurie to see Keri's new car. Also what about her boyfriend Mark? I bet that Keri wasn't the only one he fucked, just the one he did more than once.

Keri gets back at her future sisters with her father's help. How about that?

That was well written. I agree with the others, this should be a series. Maybe eventually even get Mommy involved. Maybe Mom gets found out she's been having affairs on business trips, with men and women, or groups. To bad Keri doesn't have a brother or sister. She should get even with sorority girls, for trying to get her in trouble, Daddy can help set it up with his coworkers.

I know you can do it.

This story was amazing! It was so hot and streamy!

I was turn on so much my this story that my boyfriend got the rewards!

This Seriously needs to made into a mini series or at least another part!

The annony asshole has no idea what is good or bad, he she it, IT just hates!!!

Nice little story. Does suggest that they are going to have a "honeymoon" period, where they are going to get into some more hard core stuff. Bondage is a good start, and there is a lot more they can get into from there!

I don't usually read incest stories, but was intrigued by the title, and boy am I glad I did. A second part would be great.

I see lots of compliments; and it's a pretty good story. Above average even.

But the Father's dialogue on that first interaction? Ehhhhh doesn't sound like he's a part of her family. Sounds like a guy who stumbled on the scene .

"Well," I paused as I remembered, Bill the second guy I'd had sex with. "He was kissing my belly and I asked him to lick my pussy," I shrugged, "He said he didn't really like that so I told him I didn't like sucking cock." I shook my head disgustedly, "Fuck him."

@@@ That's what I'm talking about!! Go girl! I always worked that in reverse too: “what do you mean you won't swallow? You don't see me bitching about all that pussy juice I lap up and swallow while I'm licking your pussy till you howl and claw the sheets while your thighs pull me in tighter!!” @@@

As he spoke, Dad continued to rub my clit and I whimpered as it felt good, but he was now pushing his big dick into my ass. I whimpered in pain as I felt my ass stretch around him and felt a burning sensation as he started to slide more of himself into my virgin asshole.

@@@ The pain and burning is your ass tearing and ripping because douchebag didn’t stretch your tiny ass for his big cock first and didn’t lube up your ass inside and out as well as his dick before putting it in! You’ll have to go to the E.R. for stitches and never take a dick up your ass again because it will be prone to tearing easily from now on. Damn, reality sucks ass! (Pardon the pun;) @@@

I screamed as Dad drove the full length of his cock into my ass. It hurt so bad I could feel myself start to cry and reaching down and rubbing my back, Dad whispered, "It's okay, you'll get used to it, your Daddy's going to make you cum just like this."

@@@ Oh yeah, she’s definitely cutting off your dick when you go to sleep tonight, lol. @@@

Well that story was a lot of fun!! Don't know why she didn't want to eat out the little bitches! I'd have them come over and have daddy ass fuck the both of them instead of them going to jail ;) that seems fair!!

While the writing was good (with the stray misspelling or punctuation that anyone could miss), there was a certain "Ick" factor that made me give you a lower score. I've read your "How To" article and after reading this story, I think I have to agree with you. The whole incest factor is in itself taboo enough that adding in what is essentially rape by a father makes it a little more uncomfortable than I'd like. Not sure how you could change that, given the situation you've set up for the main character.

I wish had a daddy like that, getting me all hot for him, cumming all over my tits, spanking me for being a bad girl then fucking me because I am a bad girl. i'd be a very good bad girl for him.

The ass fucking was definitely one of the better parts of the story...

Ugh! I so want someone to suck and rub my pussy! I have BIG boobs and a hairy pussy!! Want to do it?

😛

Hot as fuck. My pussy is wet now lol

I love how the two girls plan in one way back fired, but then in another way it missed fired all together I think. Mom not being the part that missed fired but a horny dad was the back fireing. How I wish I could come home to find my daughter laing in wait for me to find her nude in bed. That way I wouldn't feel like I'm raping her like it kind of sounded like in the story, when the dad first found her tied to the bed. I had to give 5 stars and save it it was that good to me. Now I want a daughter to have fun with.

This is so hot - tit sucking, cunt licking, pussy fucking, but the ass taking was great - i am so wet want to fuck this kind of Daddy - spreading my legs already!

Excellent!

This story has just about everything -- sucking, fucking, pussy eating, ass licking and some light bondage! I hope the author follows up and writes the story in which Keri and her dad get revenge on the sorority sisters and Mom.

I have enjoyed reading a lot of incest/Taboo stories but never one as hot as this. All the time I was reading this, I was pulling the pre cum from my oozing dick and licking it into my mouth. Gawd, what a Hot story. Looking fwd to your next - "Sharing his Student". Thanks for a great read!

I loved this it was super hot and it is definitely one of my favourites .Bj xo

Wow, so hot! One of the best, if not the best stories I’ve ever read on this site. Literate, great premise, good story development and a slam-dunk ending. Keep writing. You really have a talent.

Best story I've read in a long time. Sure wish there was a part 2 where they find out mom isn't really working late or out of town on business but that she's cheating. They can throw her out and have all the sex they want. lol Great job. I look forward to reading more of your stories!!

Ive teased my step dad for years hoping to get him to lose all control and make me his. I loved this story, since I put myself in her spot tied up. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up. Great story!

I loved this story. U should make a part 2. Definitely got my snatch wet wishing I had a hot guy to fuck me right now. My tasty cunt is dripping rite now.

Would love a 2nd part! ;) So hot....

Part 2 please

This was really good

Excellent story, loved it all the way. Continue with part 2 and maybe more!!

Your writing style, vocabulary and dialogue, is wonderful. Wish more noobies would read more of your stories to learn how to write well.

On this particular story I gave 4 stars.

I know it was not under non-consent but really don't care for it when the reluctant subject turns around and now is full into the scene. And, then gains the upper hand. The reluctance, shame and humilation are what 'do it' for me.

The other thing, you write SO INCREDIBLY well, Plunging ones cock full force and fully into an unworked/readied anus is only going to cause damage and pain. Anal sex is or can be taboo and shameful and punishing enough.

You move the story along with such great detail. I am sorry you missed the markon this important point.

That being said, I do hope you write more. Your contributions are well received. My personal preference is non-consent, reluctant stories, an authoritive figure or two, with a younger naive that is 'horrified' (embarrassed) of the things being done to their bodies. Especially horrified that the nasty base actions are causing them pleasure. The conflict in their minds and how they try to rectify the good girl image and the 'despicable' sexual things being done. And there is no way out.

That is so Hot! Love daddy/daughter usually younger but this was great

Dirty Dirty girl but fucking good fun who wants a good girl when you can have a bad one. But aren't her friends going to wonder how many chores she had to do to get a top car like that

GREAT FOR YOU YOUNG LADY YOU MANAGE TO TURN THE TABLES AROUND AND MAKE YOUR DAD SUFFER, THERE IS ONE THING MISSING! SEND ME A E-MAIL AT ALLWORK77629@YAHOO.COM AND I WILL TELL YOU!

Good story, good writing overall. But no girls talk like the girls in your story. I know it's fantasy but you should make things a little less obvious.

Don’t mind that other anonymous they obviously have not been around.

My friends and I did talk like that she was pissed the guy she like took me and he was my sloppy seconds said she could keep him. For me this was realistic. ;)

nice casual read

you kept it fairly "shallow", which I think I good for the start here. overall liked the plot and story.

Only thing I didn't like as much was. It sounded really like he "raped" her. In the beginning she was really against it and talked to him "NO" etc.

Maybe some in-between thoughts about the conversation with the girls and about the dad, while he talked to her and all that, would make it less like he was raping her.

just more like non consensual at first ,but an afterthought after all or secret hidden "desire"/thoughts about her dad (substantial ones, not the ones you described in the story).

I think that would've made it less like rape-like but more like "forbidden/taboo, NO we can't do that we dad/daughter (but secretly she had many thoughts about her dad).

anyways good casual read in between

Fantastic fantasy!

HC

Thats some sick shit. At least she was 18.

This is one wayward daughter who got what she deserved, and a Bad Dad who got way more than he was entitled to. Thanx for the read!

I'm not usually drawn to stories about people being tied up, but goddamn this is hot. I've probably read it at least ten times by now. You should totally do a sequel where they are sneaking around behind the mom's back.

Also, you should totally do more stories in this daddy/daughter genre.

Good story.

Only 1 recommended change. Cuffs instead of stalkings.

Leaving someone with tight bonds (cords, rope, etc) around their wrists for a long time can cut off circulation and result in nerve damage at the very least, or require amputation at the worst.

At least with cuffs of some sort that whole issue is circumvented.

damn this is one of my favorites I will cum to this again

I liked it buuuuuttt.... it's a little on the rough side for me to have enjoyed it fully especially the way he basically almost raped he ass with no lube that would hurt like a bitch without any real prep and probably would've torn her apart in ay real situation but i get that this is fantasy so that part really doesn't both me that much. I love that he was sweet with her at the end.

Totally hot! I liked everything except the end when she asked for a Camero:-) I will be reading more of your stories if they are like this! Love the daddy/daughter more than mom and son.

All I can say is I wish I had this luck and joy! Awesome erotic story.

Well done! After reading Tales of a Slutty Sister, I had to see what other stories you have written on this site. Loved the daddy/daughter story, this was truly one of the best ones I have yet to read. Mmmmm left me wanting a Daddy to find me bound and ready for him to take me just like that!

Very hot! How do they explain the condition of her wrists to mom. Keri should work mommy over then bring dad in to rejuvenate mommy and daddy's sex life.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Well shit, this was a damn good read and I'm glad he wasn't super rough or mean with her. You made it naughty sexy fun and sweet between the two. I definitely hope you write more.

This made me so wet!!

Very dirty, those girls should be ashamed of themselves bullying poor little Kerri like that. Still she always has daddy to RUB it all better and kiss the pain away. Wherever it is. Good laugh , loved it 5 stars.