All Comments on 'Bound, Gagged, Blindfolded'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Oh goodie - a rape

How original. Since you wouldn't treat your dog this badly how do you expect there to be anything interesting or entertaining in this mess? UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yum

I loved this story a lot! Not knowing what is going to happen is the best! Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wrong section

Well written but this belongs in non-consent, not bdsm. Please move it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
well written

I look forward to more

shyintxshyintxabout 9 years ago

Why do people think just because you tie them up, use a gag and blindfold it makes it BDSM? If she has been kidnapped and it wasn't a safe, sane and consensual role play it is rape and belongs in non-consent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Poorly written

This was hard to get into. You need to choose first or third person (you vs me, and he vs you). Also a lot of mis-spellings (ie begin and being are two different words). And then there is the issue of the confusing tenses...is this past or present? Too much jumping around. My 14 year old cousin could have written a better structured story!

spankfunforspankfunforover 6 years ago
Hot!

Already Being Trained! His Cock Is Her Reward! Great Start!

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