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Click hereJaney slowly raised a hand to her lips, they tingled and she could still feel Ren's lips against hers. Her body felt more alive than it had for over a year and her heart was pounding in her chest.
"It's alright Janey, I'll make sure you're safe. I won't let him hurt you again, I'll see to it..." Adam was saying furiously, the grip he had taken on her upper arm annoyed her and Janey shrugged free.
"You don't know what you're talking about Adam," Janey said startling everyone, even herself.
She stood motionless and watched as the group containing Ren reached their bikes and got on them; even after he had pulled his helmet on she could feel his eyes on her before he started his bike and they rode away.
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Hi All
Okay that's the last chapter for Brad and 'Tanaya and YES I will be doing atleast one chapter for Ren now he is out.
But first I have a holiday planned so there probaly wont be anything posted for a while.
Hope you enjoyed Brad's story and aren't too disappointed he chose as he did.
Mygypsy.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhy is everyone in the story brushing off the fact that Brad raped Janey and Tanaya is a rape apologist (by harassing her when she went to testify, etc)? I'd expect they'd have to do a lot more groveling before they could even be allowed contact with said kid
dairetoover 10 years agoIt is still unfinished.
It is a shame because it was a good story
Sassy_th4ngover 10 years agoThere is so much left still hanging and unresolved...please tell me that you're planning on writing more? Love these series...characters are incredible...cant wait to read more!
JessicaRoseover 10 years agoI love this whole saga thing with the group as it spans all these different stories. But there seems to be no tie together at the endings. You say you hope we like how Brad chose, but really, you haven't written his final decision in anywhere. He chose Tanaya, when he thought things were one way, then Janey pulls a cuntish bitch move and bombshells that it's now a different way. Last we hear of Brad, he's immobilized and stunned. The story as a whole is awesome, but this is the second time an ending is not an ending. It seems it's just the place you stopped writing.
And Janey! For the love of fuck, Janey! I absolutely adored her as Sky. But by the time her name changes -even in her and Ren's story - I can't fucking stand her. At all. She's done nothing since then but act like a selfish, spoiled bitch who whines and cowers like the stereotypical sleazy bad guy in a mob movie. In fact, as I write this (and I do promise, it's not to troll or offend) I can't help but feel honest-to-god-pissed about what a bitchy little cockroach she is. I actually hoped that Adam would drag her weak ass away cross country somewhere, and Nicky, Brad, Ren, and Tanya could all live in the house together. Hell, he could find a real woman in Jody, now that the immature brat was out of the way.
All in all, a very disappointing end to all their stories. :(
myrtlemainalmost 11 years ago"No 'Tanaya! No!" Brad begged, "Don't you see? It's not about you! It's not even about me! That bastard Adam want's Janey to himself! He want's her past gone!"
I'm guessing the past Adam wants gone is Brad, one of the men who raped Janey and his friends, the others who let her be beaten and raped repeatedly while none of them helped her escape.
I really hate how Adam is the bad guy. He's a police officer who's had a lot of experience with sex abuse and assault cases. I think he understands better than Janey what these men did to her.
spearishabout 11 years agoGod I hope Janey gets a backbone soon I'm really starting to hate the woman .What a wimp.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is the most amazing story I've ever read, the whole saga, it's just incredible. I've spent the last two days reading it. I know it's been years, but I just can't help but join in the band wagon and ask for at least that one last chapter with Ren. It just kills me that Janey put herself in another abusive (emotionally abusive) relationship, I really want to see her come to terms with that! I leave you nothing but the highest of praise. This is what all erotica writting should be like! I've never read a kidnap store that was so investing, well developed and over all incredible! Congratulations!
