All Comments on 'Brad's Revenge'

permanently. But the other actions are within the bounds of reason for revenge on the slut. It is almost a 50/50 on her returning to him or becoming a BDSM star for money.

The punishment far exceded the crime. Especially to the daughter.

Great plot. Well written and hot. reminds me of the stories certain fortish women write. Not quit as extreme as their stories

Sick , twisted, evil, sadistic but a perfect tale.

I loved it and hope to read more from you

Nice story,well written. Thanks:)

Absolutely supurb. I havnt read a story that good in a long time..

I loved it. I myself am ruled by my anger and I connected with Brad even as a female. The ending was amazing as well. It not only is sexual, but tells of a real life lesson. Many people need to lose their pride and arrogance, even if it has to go to the extremes. Great story.

I stumbled across this purely by accident in search of something else and I'm glad I took the time to read it. Very well written and even though it's not something I normally read, I found it very enjoyable and hot. I've added it to my favorites.

Loved it and Wonder why you dont write More like it. Maybe a Husband getting Revenge on a Cheating Wife and her Sister or Girl Friend who helped her to Stray.

I loved this story it was evil,mean,sexy and got me wet all at the same time great job luk forward to reading more ov your storys or you could make brad's revenge an on goin story.

...this worked out pretty good. He way over reacted, hell, I have been in jail. he had a gravy train. But if they are both happy what can I say? Great story.

A little revenge - fine. But when you pound on someone for 3 months, it makes you a pathetic psychopath. And that takes the fun out of the story. A "1".

A very powerful story. I am not into pain at all, a little sub and dom is OK with me, nothing more. But, as I said, if this is their way and they like it I will not say anything against it. I know that this is just a story but I also know that there are similar true stories going on right now.

Absolutely beautifully written - believable, coherent, logical and so much passion. I can't wait to read chapter 2.

Absolutely brilliant storyline and really well written Dolourmaster. Have leanings towards being Dom but where to start. Keep up the excellent stories !!!

When a plot is as tenuous as this, you wish the author hadn't bothered. It's not sexy.

Excellent use of bdsm and romance.

She hit him with a length of metal, crushing his skull and killing him immediately. This was simply awful. You are one sick puppy. Seek professional help.

There is NO redeeming quality to your story.

It was well written and I liked it.

Good kinky revenge story!!

I realize this story is fiction, but it doesn't seem remotely plausible by any stretch of the imagination. Sorry, I'm just not buying it.

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