All Comments on 'Brainy Teen Ch. 04'

Mind control perhaps.

Who cares what category it's in? It's a hot story by a talented writer. You tell a great story with very well developed characters and attention to detail. At least the author can say that the goal is lesbianism, even if it is via mind control.

1. Is Madelynn is Wendy's "best friend", why did you say that she's usually alone in school back in chapter 1?

2. How did they magically find out about Madelynn?

3. All Madelynn did was ask "who knows about the evil corp?" and went to that person. If just doing that was enough to compromise the dude who knew all about it, he wouldn't even be alive.

4. Who starts an investigation because their "best" friend becomes more sociable?

The story is good for a fap but logic doesn't seem to have visited it.