All Comments on 'Break Down Ch. 02'

by UndercoverInterracial

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gasmuse77gasmuse77over 10 years ago
Response to "To be continued...if you want."

Please do...but certainly hope you don't let so much time pass between submitting chapters. Suspect the obvious plot extension, but hope for an unexpected surprise or two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please Continue

It's very sexy. I'd really like to read about the drama when her husband (remember him?) finds out and she realises what the price of all this truly is. Could have a very satisfying ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please continue! write tons more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome Writing

Love it , write lots more ..kinkier the better and the Daughter and the Mother together

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
NEED TO WRITE MORE

Love to read about Red and the mother, then the daughter and mother...then all three forced into a lesbian threesome while being fucked by Marcus......mmmmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

To bad you didn't write these.. I have read them before.. Different names, Same plot,,

UndercoverInterracialUndercoverInterracialover 10 years agoAuthor
Author's notes

There are thousands of works here on Literotica, and thousands more on other sites. It doesn't surprise me that my plot shares similarities with another, but I can assure you that your accusation of plagiarism is, well, wrong.

Thank everyone else for your support and feedback - I'm taking it all into consideration! Next chapter has been submitted; I hope you enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lulzzz

another prison fantasy............ got to love it!!!!!!!!!!! lulzzzz

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
complete trash...

but extremely erotic trash, keep up the good work

TigersmanTigersmanabout 9 years ago
Great

This is a great story. I loved it that Marcus finally filled Julie's little white pussy with his black baby batter. It definitely is getting hotter as Marcus is now fucking Julie's daughter Nicole not to mention Aly. It would be nice if all three white girls ended up with a baby bump courteous of all the black cock they are begging for.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This is the best interracial porn story I read in a while.. please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
53 yr old bbc HOTWIFE

I came 4 times reading the details of these very hot encounters. Marcus ,like many black stallions with his prowess, converts one white woman at a time into bbc sluts. Happened to me as well. My supportive husband arranged a massage for me from a wonderfully attractive fit young black stud. I was immediately turned into a slut for him at first sight of his huge uncut ebony cock and low hanging plum size balls. That young stallion fucked me like I never had before. Took me to oblivion . And I have never been back from black. Converted into a complete white slut for huge young black cock. Just like Julie,I dress for my stud. As slutty as he chooses. In public and in private. Tight extremely short dresses no bra or panty's with four or five inch high heels. Not the attire you would expect a married 53 year old woman to wear. And as I mentioned, all with my supportive husbands blessing. I especially love for him to watch . And he gets quite excited when doing so. I am an older white slut for young black stallions. Love it and very proud to know tjat they want me as such.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
continue

yo, pls continue, gr8 story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

need a follow up of the adventures of nikki and ali

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nah, I am good with this

I know there is another chapter but there is nothing new but boring same old stuff.

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