All Comments on 'Breakdown Cover'

"a read to take the reader off to a wonderful wonderland," stimulating, arousing and suscitating. It doesn't matter, either a sequel to this tale or a fresh story from this writer: this reader will be following each twist and turn of the telling.

obviuosly able to haandle big cocks

more of the story dam it's real real quality

wowwww...You are gifted..You put me right there in her place... don't ever..ever give up writing...

patti

Top story and well told.i

One of the more enjoyable stories I've read so far, it has that old school English flavor that I'm partial too. Well written with an easy flow. I haven't read your other submissions yet but I certainly will....giving this story one of my rare five star ratings!

Great story, thank you

Great story. I hope you’re still writing.

Was this written by a twelve year old. Rape isn't sexy and this wasn't sexy either.

Especially not with the grammar and spelling mistakes.

Seams? No seems. Heals? No heels.

Great writing and love the Bill and Trevor characters