All Comments on 'Breakfast'

Love the play banter back and forth between them. I knew he had her. Just a matter of the right words. Gosh brought back some great memories for me.. benefits like these go with any meal.. Thanks for the story

Fairly good story seemed pretty real. I think a bit longer and more depth of the seduction would have made it better. But all in all nice job

Just wish it was a little less rushed.