All Comments on 'Breaking Michelle Ch. 01'

by Daddy_Jack

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Hot Story!!!

That was a great story that you wrote. I like how she was able to remember the sequence of Jack and herself from the past. I can hardly wait to see what she does when she opens the e-mail and reads the response she got from the couple.

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