All Comments on 'Breaking My Girl Ch. 03'

speak the words that this young girl speaks. In other words 're-think your dialog'

I know the previous reviewer was unsatisfied with the unrealistic dialogue. But come on, this is a fantasy. It's okay to be unreal. I thought it was very, very hot. Continue in your current style.

'rethink the dialogue' my ass! you did a marvelous job and i'm excited to see what the next chapter brings!

The three chapters of this story are just out of this world. I had to stop half way thru just to cool down.

Wow that made my pussy so wet. I loved every bit of that. I am waiting for chapter 4 impatiently. I need a Daddy just like that.

I your story is great keep it going i can't wait to find out what happens next.