All Comments on 'Breath of Fresh Air Ch. 04'

Please don't make me wait another month for the next chapter!

Please, please, please update soon! I mean, I know this just posted, but I love this story and leaving them like this is breaking my heart.

It is such a sad ending to a beautiful beginning.

But it doesn't make the painful part any easier.

By the end of Chapter 4 I had almost forgotten about the shower scene at the beginning, but not quite. That was very sexy writing. I enjoyed it all the way down.

Now I'm hoping that Mike and Katie can find their way through her nightmares.

Thanks for another rich and riveting chapter.

LOVE this story, please update soon!

That was some wonderful writing. Mike is such an amazing guy. It sucks what Katie's doing do him, but I think if she had told him earlier it would lessen the impact of what it is she's hiding. I think this way she's forced to figure out what she wants - him or someone else or to be alone. I think they have the potential to be an even stronger couple once they get this sorted out.

^_^

It's Great - I'm hooked!!! PLS HURRY!

I hope your next chapter is called "the make-up".

Great story. I just started reading it today.

*****

Katie is mean!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

well first of all that's what she said. but really please finish this story soon I am completely enraptured!

You win the internet. I know, it's so over-used but somehow it never fails to make me giggle.

I've read this story a bunch of times, and I STILL want to smack some sense into Katie after reading this chapter! Every time!

I'd like some Mike in my life right about now. Idiot Katie, ugh. Lol. This is an incredibly relatable story, Panthem! Thank you!

I'm not sure why this has become a great misunderstanding. Boy meets girl they go out and have some fun, the sex ain't half bad either.

Ive lived both sides and youre spot on on your writing. I feel for Mike but totally understand Katie. Other commenters ragging on her dont understand how deeply entrenched scars can be, how they shape you and the fallout. I dont go looking for stories like this but when it pops up, I have to thank the writer for opening other peoples eyes. So thank you. Great writing.

When someone leaves you after investing yourself in them it leaves a void in you.

Excellent story.