All Comments on 'Bree and Nick Ch. 01'

by Ember Faye

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gregg4gregg4almost 15 years ago
great arousing story

hi Ember, i cant believe there's no feedback on this story about you and Nick.

there's just something about your work choices, the mental picture you paint, ant that oh so special look in your eye

great story,i' surely like to read more.

(note to self: change name to Nick, call EmberFaye )

gregg

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hey

This was a good start

softey1softey1almost 15 years ago
Hot

you did good as this was a very hot story and seeing your body I would be also !

MaverickManMaverickManalmost 15 years ago
Ummmmmmmmmmmm!

So very hot. Reminds me of something that happened to me once upon a time.

Wonderful job with the imagery.

Beam_of_liteBeam_of_litealmost 15 years ago
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE

Great story...now get busy writing part 2!!!!

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Just a geeky gamer gal. Use to have the writing bug when I was younger. Haven't had it for a long time. I hope you enjoy the erotica I wrote when I was younger!

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