Brenda and Linda

The "games" described early in the story are so disrespectful of others no one would waste their time on either bitch.

Damm, what a fantasy!!!

WTF is up with the dot dot dots? wouldn't a single peck at a comma key be better than three periods? Did you not take Literature or some type of English Lit. class while being educated?

I enjoyed it, but I need to think it was not hard to write because it is every man's fantasy. Somehow, I suspect reality is more challenging, but this is fiction so what the heck? Good luck to him. He's going to need it.

What a terrible problem to have!

Sounds like double your pleasure, but more likely to be double trouble. Amazingly, you smoked out a few commenters who, of course, have actually lived your fantasy.

Nice twist! You made Corsican Sisters :)

But nothing like the one that this guy is going to have for the rest of his life.

Signed: BTW

Good story. He's going to have both hands full.

Hope he has a great job. twins in his bed , now he has a double set of twins. Go from three mouths to feed to seven. maybe he'll get one set of girls and one set of boys. I still envy his ass.

Double barreled shotgun.... because there are two of them. Funny line.

I gave the story five stars for its ingenuity.

I had a different situation. My wife cheated, I dumped her ass and her dad told their whole family to not blame me for ANYTHING... that it was all HER. Three months later, I got the cherries of two of her younger sisters. My ex was furious when she found out that they'd moved in and taken her place. When they showed her their baby bumps, she finally realized that she'd fucked up.

I was dating a twin, one night we went ot and her sister went with her boyfriend somewhere else. Now they always said if one had an extreme emotion the other could tell. So on this date we got out of the theatre when Shari my girlfriend suddenly jerked sideways and her face looked red like it had been slapped or punched. Either way, Shari tells me her sister was very afraid all of a sudden. By this time I learned to trust her feelings, I could also tell them apart because Shari had a small birthmark on her left hand right by the cuticle of her ring finger. You wouldn't notice unless you knew about it and were looking for it, and no I never let on how I told them apart. Anyway, Shari has me driving like a bat out of hell telling me to hurry. Now since I was a paramedics of I had registered my car as an emergency response vehicle. The ambulance core had no problem with that since it was a four wheel drive Toyota 4Runner and I got through anything. They also paid for me to have the full off-road addition put in, like a winch up front and back, bottom plating to protect the underside if I had to go through forestry or any kind of off-road driving. I didn't mind as they kicked in gas addition also due to the weight making it more of a guzzler. I was fully stocked, just didn't have a stretcher with me. Anyway, the way Shari was talking I put the lights on and went code three, also notified control that while I was out of command area I was responding to a reported emergency and requested PD join us when I gave them the address. My core captain got on the radio and told me to go to tach two, she then asked and was given everything I knew to this point. As she was Shari's G-D mother she believed me. We got to the address and found her boyfriend on the ground and her just barely holding her own against three pigs, I mean punks, that thought they would have some fun with her. My getting there with lights and sirens ( code 3 remember ) followed by PD not twenty seconds behind and an ambulance to boot, they tried to run. PD got them while I first checked the boyfriend who had as near as I could tell two stab wounds and a fracture to the skull. Lanie Shari's sister had bruises on her face and a possible cracked rib. I stabilized the boyfriend and loaded him onto the ambulance, Lanie went with him and I took shari to the hospital to be with her sister. Now in the ER they saw Shari had what looked like the same injuries and thought I may have caused them. When we both told them the exact same story they just shrugged and let us be. Lanie wound up marrying the boyfriend, but Shari and I broke up as it wasn't meant to be. We are still great friends and their mother was like a mother to me as well. When she passed I was still in the military but got emergency leave to go home for the funeral. Afterward Shari and I had a talk and she told me she was dating someone and thought he was going to pop the question right before her mom passed away. Well after a month he did and I was invited and asked to be a groomsman at the wedding. I accepted and asked her if her betrothed could tell them apart. She said he usually could, and when I clued him in he never made a mistake again. Now after your story I wonder back to the times we had made love if Lanie could tell, and no there was no way in hell I was asking that question.

Thanks for the offering.....

I loved that story, Light and fun

and have them both cheat on him and ruin his life...unless of course he has a double barrel shot gun!

For something to actually happen in ANY of your stories. You seem so afraid of offending anyone, or of getting negative feedback that you write really tame inoffensive stories. Don't get me wrong, they're well written and all, but all so predictable. Try injecting some life or unexpected plots into your stories. Please don't take this as a personal attack on your writing, but as just my opinion on your stories. You write well, but I wish you would stop holding back, and go nuts once in a while. Who knows, you might enjoy the freedom.