Brett and Elizabeth Ch. 02

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"Alicia, take him down and make him eat." Elizabeth tried to sound stern as another contraction tore through her. "Goddamnit!" she hissed through clenched teeth and gripped Dave's arm. She tried to remember to breathe, but this one felt different for some reason.

"Come on, Brett, let's go. You won't do her any good if you pass out." Alicia led him away.

Brett lasted ten minutes before he was dragging Alicia back to the maternity ward. He couldn't be away; something was calling him back.

Dave intercepted them in the hall outside Elizabeth's room. "Thank God. I was just coming to find you guys."

There was a multitude of people rushing in and out of the room. Brett's eyes flashed to his best friend's. "What's going on, Dave? What the hell happened?" Brett didn't wait for Dave's answer; he pushed on past him.

Elizabeth was lying in bed, looking tiny and frightened. Her heart monitor was racing, Brett could see, and all color was gone from her face. She seemed to be fading fast.

Dave came up behind Brett and laid a hand on his friend's shoulder. "They hooked her up two minutes ago, said they didn't like the way she looked." He spoke as fast as he could. "They put the monitors on and then you showed up. And she's started to bleed, Brett. Heavily, it seems."

All hell broke loose then. Suddenly there were a hundred people in the room, throwing phrases around like "uterine rupture," "fetal distress," and "emergency section."

A kindly, middle-aged looking nurse came in and ushered Dave and Alicia out the door, then came back for Brett, who refused to leave Elizabeth's side.

"What the hell's going on!" Brett demanded, trying his damndest to remain calm, but was rapidly losing the battle. He allowed the nurse to take him gently by the arm and lead him away from Elizabeth's bedside.

She spoke quietly, "Elizabeth's uterus is rupturing. She's going down for surgery right now." The nurse, bless her soul, must have seen the look of panic cross Brett's face right then. She put her arm around him and led him back to his sister. "You can walk down with her."

"What the hell does that mean!"

Before the nurse could answer, Elizabeth was whisked out the door. Brett had to nearly run to keep up.

"Hey baby," he grinned with false cheerfulness as he jogged along.

Elizabeth reached for his hand. Brett took it and held on as best he could. "What's going-"

"It's OK, Sprite, everything's fine. You'll be fine."

"But Brett, the baby-"

"Hush, love, it'll be fine."

They were at the swinging doors. Brett kissed her and she was gone, but not before he saw the look of desperation on his sister's face. It nearly drove him to his knees.

Alicia appeared at his side and took him by the arm. Brett looked down, seeming to not recognize her. "Brett, come on." She tugged at his arm.

They entered a small, cozy room just across the hall from the surgical unit. It appeared to be a private waiting room. Dave was already there, staring out the window to the landscape beyond.

Dave turned away from the window when he heard the door. His little sister walked in with Brett in tow. He strode to them and wrapped his arms around them both.

Almost immediately the same nurse that had talked to Brett in Elizabeth's room entered. She sat the trio down on one of the couches and explained Elizabeth's precarious situation.

It was rare, but uterine ruptures during labor did happen. She couldn't tell them yet how extensive the damage was, or even what the outcome would be.

"But Elizabeth, is she OK? The baby?" Brett didn't even know what to ask, what to say. He was desperate for some tiny bit of reassurance his sister wasn't going to die.

The nurse didn't tell him that the fetal survival rate of a ruptured uterus was low. She herself had only seen three, and of the three, two had died. The mothers, however, had all survived. That she did tell him.

The nurse excused herself from the room, saying she'd be back, and to use the phone to page the desk if they needed anything, anything at all.

Brett, Dave and Alicia sat together on the sofa, Alicia sandwiched between their huge shoulders. They barely spoke. Time passed, but not nearly fast enough for them. Brett got up and paced, then sat, then paced some more. Still nothing. He was ready to go looking for the nurse when she appeared in the doorway.

She smiled at Brett and said, "You have a daughter." She obviously didn't know Brett and Elizabeth's true relation. "She made it." The nurse herself was stunned.

Brett could only nod. He swallowed hard. "Elizabeth?"

"She's still with us, Brett. You need to know, though, the surgeon is having some difficulties. I'm sorry, but I don't know anything more than that."

Brett's world rocked. He reeled back, and would have fallen had Dave not been standing right behind him.

Dave grabbed Brett's shoulders. "She'll make it, man, she's tough." Dave's voice was low, Brett barely heard him.

The nurse left them alone again, but not for long. "You may come see your daughter now, Brett, if you'd like. She's a trooper."

Like her Mom, Brett thought. God, please let Elizabeth be OK. I can't live without her. He thought, briefly, about calling their parents, then shoved that thought aside. They'd made their choice, and so had Brett and Elizabeth.

Brett followed the nurse to neonatal where the baby was being kept for observation. It was a short walk from maternity through a single set of doors.

The tiny baby was swaddled tightly in a pretty pink receiving blanket, all four pounds, thirteen ounces of her. Several nurses and aides were fawning and cooing over her when Brett walked in. Each one looked up and smiled at him.

"Here she is," one whispered and handed the little bundle over to him. "You're daughter." Brett didn't bother to correct her. He swallowed, or tried to, over the lump in his throat.

One of the nurses guided him over to a glider. He sat and automatically began to rock. Everyone else quietly faded away.

Tears fell shamelessly down his cheeks. In his arms he held his sister's daughter, his niece, yet he loved her as if she were his very own.

Little blue eyes slowly blinked open. A rosebud mouth stretched in a wide yawn.

Brett smiled. "Hi," he whispered.

The little blue eyes focused intently on him for several seconds, then drifted shut again. Brett leaned down and placed a gentle kiss on her perfect nose.

The door to the nursery opened. Brett looked up to see Alicia standing there with a nurse. They both entered.

"Hey Alli," Brett greeted her.

"They said we could come down, Brett, and see the baby. Dave's outside," Alicia jerked her thumb towards the door. Brett looked over to the window that faced the corridor to see his best friend waving at him.

"Is he coming in?"

"I think he's scared," Alicia whispered conspiratorially. She walked over to where Brett was seated, rocking the baby. "Oh, Brett, she's so sweet!"

"Yeah she is," Brett smiled. "Would you like to hold her?"

"Really? Can I? You don't mind?" Alicia's brown eyes sparkled.

"Of course not." He stood, let Alicia get settled in the glider, then handed her the precious little pink bundle.

Alicia took the baby and stretched up to kiss Brett's cheek before he stood. "Thanks Brett. She's going to be OK, you know. Elizabeth, she'll make it."

Brett straightened. "I hope so Alli, I can't lose her."

Alicia looked at him quietly for a moment, working something over in her mind, then turned her attention back to the baby. She began to rock and sing to her.

Brett ventured out into the hall to see Dave just as their original nurse came looking for them. She'd begun to think of the trio as one unit.

"The surgeon wants to speak to you, Brett. Elizabeth pulled through, but not without some complications. He's waiting for you."

"Oh God, thank you," Brett whispered, then found himself engulfed by Dave's hug.

Dave released him and said, "I'll get Alicia, go see the doc."

The surgeon told Brett that because he'd been unable to stop the bleeding and, considering there was so much damage to the uterus, he'd had to do a hysterectomy. Elizabeth would recover fully, but would never bear another child. Brett could go see her, though she was still under.

Elizabeth looked like death warmed over, but Brett had never seen a more beautiful sight in his life.

Back in the little waiting room, Dave held Alicia in his arms as she cried. The relief had nearly overwhelmed her and she'd come close to fainting.

"Shh, Alligator, it's OK. It's all OK." He made a clumsy attempt to mop up her tears with the hem of his t-shirt, but it wasn't enough. Her nose streamed twin rivers, and the tears only kept coming. He got up and grabbed the roll of paper towel over by the small sink in the corner.

She quieted eventually, much to Dave's relief. They sat there together that way for a long time, until the nurse walked in and saw them.

"Oh, I didn't realize you two were still here. Elizabeth's starting to wake up. Would you like to see her?"

"It's OK?" Dave asked, surprised they'd be allowed in while Brett was still in there.

"Sure. Come on." She directed Dave and Alicia down the hall and pointed out Elizabeth's room. "Just don't stay too long."

The door to the private room stood open. Dave and Alicia paused just inside and watched as Brett held the baby in front of Elizabeth so she could see her.

"Still want to name her Samantha?" Brett asked.

Elizabeth nodded. "How about Samantha June?"

"I like it. Samantha June," he repeated. Brett bent his head to Elizabeth's and kissed her softly on the lips, unaware they had an audience.

Dave pulled Alicia back out of the room. "Shit, I think we just walked in on something we weren't supposed to see," he whispered to his sister.

Alicia shrugged. "So what?"

"Isn't that, like, weird?"

"You're weird. Don't be such a prude, David."

Dave opened his mouth to protest, then snapped it shut. What the hell could he say to that? He'd just never thought of Brett and Elizabeth that way before. He'd definitely never thought of Alicia that way.

"Come on, let's go in and see them." Alicia grabbed his hand and pulled him back into the room.

It was a sweet moment, the two sets of siblings together with little Samantha. Alicia sat in the corner holding her, singing softly. Dave thought his sister had a pretty voice; he'd really never noticed it before. He stood off to one side, taking in the scene in front of him.

Dave did notice his best friend couldn't take his eyes off Elizabeth, nor could Elizabeth take her eyes off Brett. He wondered when that had all come about, and how? And did it even matter? He guessed not, not in the big scheme of things, anyway.

Brett was laughing and saying something to him, but he'd missed it, as lost in his own thoughts as he'd been. He pushed away from the wall he'd been holding up and went to join his sister and his friends.

To be continued...

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UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

Very well written and kept my attention all the way through. Excellent story.

HardbawlHardbawlover 1 year ago

From 1 to 5, I’d rate this is six.

CapewideCapewideover 5 years ago

wonderful story so far, full of emotions. I like your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Well written but the labor crushed my erection in -30 seconds xD

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 8 years ago
"Brett And Elizabeth Ch. 02:" - Twenty-two Year Old Single Brother, Brett McCarty and His Eighteen Year Old Sister Unmarried New Mother, Elizabeth McCarty.

The hysterectomy of Elizabeth is a great disappointment to me. My feeling is the writer/author, 'chargergirl', is reluctant to impregnate a sister (or any blood-kin) relative by a brother (or any blood-kin male) relative!!! Too bad. Although.....I could be wrong with my wild guess.

Mary_K_KinksterMary_K_Kinksterover 8 years ago
Some people are just idiots...

...and the fact that they are willing dangle it out there for all to see never ceases to amaze me. Of course they have the relative safety of hiding within their anonymity. As if a screen name were any less anonymous. Just forces upon them a history. Anon allows a clean slate with every post and no accountability for the vile vindictive previously spewed.

Enough of my view of what's wrong in the world. This is an amazing story. Wait. You know that is too easy to say. It's not really that great of a story. I mean it's the same story a lot of people have written on here. Brother and sister grow up in a dysfunctional family. This creates a the big brother/protector, vulnerable little sister/protectee. A set of circumstance that drives them together. Strong emotions and desperate situations. Put that in a pot and stir it a bit and their love for one another becomes physical. Much guilt and uncertainty finally falls away and they succumb to their desires. And they live (or not) happily (or not) ever after.

I'm not putting you or your story down, it's the nature of these types of stories. You decide which elements get included, which get more emphasis than the others and so on. We've all read numerous stories like this on here. But you make it come alive. Your writing is a joy to read. You feel like you have known the characters all your life and are saddened when the story draws to a close as you won't get to peek in on their lives anymore. A palpable sense of loss with The End. You paint a beautiful scene with your words, believable, real, and fantastic at once. You style is so familiar and it is comfortable as you are drawn in. The worlds you create are often full of angst, which builds, and you feel it in your gut, until it boils over and your are released. And you just don't want to leave.

I only have one chapter left of your written word to consume. I've read them all in the last 4 or 5 days. Your gonna leave me Jonesing for more. I'm not your biggest fan. That is evident by the many that cheered you on as you wrote, waiting out the days between installments. But I certainly am addicted. You've crafted a beautiful story, set of stories really, full of positivity, love, and hope for the future. I hope you are proud of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well, I give up reading this and will take a look at your Dave story.

Brett's character makes me cringe. It's quite clear that the father is the villain and Jim's punishment is written off. The change in relationship with Brett and Elizabeth was too fast and sudden especially considering she's bearing a baby that is related to a waste of life. You're telling me Brett doesn't feel angry or jealous at all? Sure... I'm sure this habit doesn't follow with your other stories.

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 11 years ago
Brett and Elizabeth Ch. 02'

Not being sure, I feel this story series has been written by a female (I haven't checked the Profile Biography yet), due to some feelings' descriptions that aren't quiet on par with most male authors. In any case, my emotional love (I really hate it that I fall in love with fictional characters) for Brett's and Elizabeth;s love for these siblings goes all the way to my toes, passing through every nerve fiber of my body.

The thought of a hysteroctomy is such a disaster for any couple it's as if the surgery rips your heart out through one's throat. It happened to my mother's half-sister when she was in her early twenties, before she had children and at the request of her husband--because she loved him so much--and a couple years later he wanted to have children, and left her. She committed suicide after the fourth attempt less than two years later. It's a horrible thing to happen physically, and much more so emotionally; it has surely turned this story, that was progressing along so beautifully, topsy-turvy, inside out--even leaving me emotionally ripped apart even knowing the story is not real..

The author has done a magnificant job of providing the readers with excellent character protrayal; their dialogue is so beautifully constructed as to place the reader right into the presence of their conversations and interactions. The hero and his Sprite are so real as if to be the child or children of the reader--because of the love for them we, as readers, express with our emotional connection to them, their dilemma, their love and the seemingly undying love they now have for each other.

Chapter 03 has been written so any fantasies I have for Brett's and Elizabeth's future are now established, written for the ages. I will keep my hopes up for the best for them though!! The author has done a celestial, heavenly, and epic-like writing of this series. Don't ever stop dispensing incestual love stories of this caliber!!

beachbum1958beachbum1958over 11 years ago
Wonderful stories

The whole Brett & Elizabeth and Dave and Alicia story cycle is warm and sweet, and loving, and I truly wish it were longer, more chapters, more to read - my wife thinks it's the sweetest love story ever, never mind that it's about sibling love, with a little tweaking they could be woven into a single narrative, probably a best seller! Please do think about more from Brett and Elizabeth, and especially Dave and Alicia, we love them all!

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