All Comments on 'Brian's Revenge'

Please write more!!!

You had a nice start to this story.

I'll give it Five Stars for the introduction. We'll see where it goes from here.

I came before I even finished the story!!hot hot hot

Great story as always. Love the possibilities. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

I love stories like these, but I think this is the best story yet due to how it involves incest,blackmail,perversion,possible rape,lesbian act, and there is so much else I can add.

I wish you have already written Chapter 2 since it's been a year. >_> Well, I still hope for the best.

Best of luck!

I can't believe you stopped there. That's cruelty. Literotica readers deserves better! I hope everyone chews you out for leaving us hanging! Now back to that hot keyboard and make it happen?

you get a one just for your ending the rest is not much better

It has been about a year and a half since you first posted this and you had the nerve to put to be continued on it. I will check back in one month (today is May 17, 2012) and if you have not done the continuation I will boycott your work or I might put a 1 on every new thing you write. You have a lot of nerve. If you want to have a following this is not the way to do it. I was reading all your works, this will be the last one.

I did like the story (as far as it went)!

its on another site by the same author. If you want the rest google it

Nore

But even there chapter 3 and ??? missing....

Too bad very interesting story :(

A lot of other unfinished tales on the other site too (But last update in april 2014)

Started off good but needs to be completed

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