All Comments on 'Brian's Story'

Writers "are" what they write, so it's easy to see this "writer" is a wimp who has surrendered his manhood and won't fight to get it back. The story is seriously flawed on many levels. The common rules of grammar and punctuation rules are a mystery to this “writer,” making the content of this submission read like a third-grader forced to deliver a term paper. It’s a complete waste of time. I do pity the “writer” and I hope he’ll get the psychological therapy he so badly needs.

Nicely told story about a man and wife exploring their sexuality. Not all couples conform to narrow-minded standards as some espouse, but chance to reach out for more in life.

TRUE wife-sharing is just that.. sharing.. She may "play" but I guarentee she goes home with her husband after the fun.. and what they share between themselves goes far, far deeper than any cock can ever go into a pussy.

A REAL man is willing to share with another those deep, almost unfathomable emotions.. to experience them and revel in the afterglow of that experience.. Not run from them and deny they exist and belittle others that choose to expand who they are and how they feel..

So, open your mind.. open your heart.. and take a chance on living something that may change your life for the better in ways you could never anticipate.. Keep your mind closed and expect to live only as you do now..

Everytime we read a story like this a bunch of you guys instantly start going Alpha Dog and saying the writer is a wimp husband, it drives me nuts. I love a good story of seduction...one where the individuals are pushed tot eh limit by passion to do things they ordinarily wouldn't. Damn dudes, don't be so insecure about you're own machismo saying "I'd kick any man's ass who touched my woman" and allow yourself to just read a seductive story. Coleridge wrote "the reader needs to have a willing suspension of disbelief" so suck it up male bitches and let it go for a change!

There are others sicker but not in this story.

Great story, keep writing, we enjoy the so called wimp husbands, sexual humiliation and cuckold stories. Ignore the immature self righteous comments by those who have no sexual experience and no imagination whatsoever.

Thanks for the story!

I thought that this was a good story of approach to a taboo line followed by crossing it.

I found the responses from the 'anonymous' 'real men' more entertaining. They obviously have a very limited exposure to real life and think everything is about macho 'keep of my woman' behavior. What a paucity of experience of people - or perhaps blindness to what is happening - these responses show.

...1st rate...shows those who are too limp-dicked to be involved in these XXXcellent experiences what a full marriage is all about...YOU GO GIRL!!!XXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXO;)))...your next phase has to include BLACK SUPREMACY!!!...several BLACK STALLIONS in your stable will balance the equation...live life for YOU, and NOT for those who would put you down because they have no imagination...nor can get it up...stay as HOT, HOTTER , and more...ENJOY...!!!XXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXOXOXO;))))))

This story, while missing the actual culimation, is better than the ones with all the humiliation and nonsensical progression which irked a lot of readers. I'd like to read a Part 2 of this one -- what happened up in the room even if it's only recounted by the wife when she finally returns to her husband filled with the cum of the 2 guys who took her.

I agree with the other guy, a really good and sexy tale to whet our appetites, but so cruel to leave us hanging although some would say having to complete the next chapter in our own minds might be just as rewarding. Kind of like a woman half clothed being more alluring than one completely naked. Anyway, thanks to the author for another in a long line of good works.

By a NO talent mindless "writer" !!

I don't tolerate anybody riding my woman or my motorcycle. Any wimp assed piece of crap who encourages his woman to fuck other people is a perverted pile of shit who is beneanth my contempt. For the benefit of all you sick assholes out there, I am not anonomous.

This is an excellent story. The author took time to let us get to know him and his wife and to see how their fantasies have gradually moved to action step by step. It also captures the mixed feelings they both experience as they share the fantasies and the gradually increasing real experiences.

I wish my wife, who has a great body that I love to make love to, would be so understanding of my wanting to see her do things like this step by step and enjoy experiencing my fantasies with me, and eventually reaching a point where she'd let another man have her pussy and make her come. However, she is very traditional in her ideas about sex and makes me feel silly if I ever bring it up even though I know she dated a number of men and enjoyed sex with them before we met. So I'll just keep reading stories on Literotica. This was a really good one.

Liked the story as a starter to a bigger story. Write more xoxoxoxo Annette

He pimps his wife out so that she can be exposed to every nasty disease known to man? Yeah - that makes sense.

1 star

Just another pimp and whore story. Our LW rep has given her approval. Real men share . Just keep telling yourself that while you wear your mom's panties.

Great wife and she should keep going and bring her cum filled pussy home for her husband so he can find out how awesome it is to lick a wifes pussy that has just been fucked and filled with cum from another guy. All husbands should try licking cum filled pussy to see how great it is . I love it!!!!!!!!o