All Comments on 'Bridal Suite Submission Ch. 01'

Great story, easy five, please continue

and wonderfully written. Thank you. Looking forward to more.

please continue.

This one of the best story beginnings I have read on this site. Very well writen. The main character is compelling. I look forward to reading the following chapters.

Great story which has been well written. Love it.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...so wonderfully written. Great build up and terrific character development. Can't wait for mOOOOOOre!

I cannot wait for thw next chapter.

Brilliant. Erotic, coherent and utterly believable. More please soon!

I cannot wait to see what happens next.

This is a fantastic story. It's so well-done, exceptionally well-written, and you do such a good job of bringing forward the inner thoughts and feelings of the character - much like how I remember O. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

I have really enjoyed this story.....when reading you feel like you are part of the story. I'm looking forward to the next part. Keep up the good work.

A winning combination, hot and literate! I envy Peter.

before I take the crop to you!

Very well written; so much background but none of it drab or irrelevant or trite.

Well done. Very hot.

like walking into a naughty candy store... tasting one subtle flavour after the other... just with the tip of my tongue before walking on to another delicious treat... thank you, honey, it was sheer delight.

... dark, sweet, and with an edge that keeps it from being saccharine. If you can sustain this loving mood, with a good girl and nice boy being deliciously naughty, this could become one of the best series in Lit's catalog.

More, please!

Beautifully written, and I can't wait to see what follows! Thank you for sharing it! "O" was my first love in erotica...

I look forward to this development. Imagine the demands that could be made of this lovely couple. What would she do to be like "O"?

This was a great story. I can't wait to read the next installment.

This is, by far one of the best stories that I've ever read. Not just here on literotica, but anywhere. You, have enormous talent. Thank you so very much for sharing that talent with us all. On a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the best, I give you a 12. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment.

what a great first chapter,the characters are fleshed out so vividly. i'm eager to read on, wishing i had this girls ball....

bravo!!

This is a very well written prelude into what I suspect will be a deliciously naughty story

Wow. I felt like I couldn't breathe while I was reading that. Perfect.

Thank God! I found this story after enduring a thoroughly depressing non-consent piece. I love happy endings and I love BDSM. This is going to be a fabulous story!!! Thank you for writing such a deliciously sweet and seductive chapter. I'm hooked! Reading on....

Hah! Exactly what happend to me. Phew, great story.

Extraordinarily well written. Perfect really. My compliments. One can't help but continue reading. You do your heroine well.

Loved your story and will certainly read the next chapter but I interrupt myself to tell you I found it by looking for a fellow E and H winner in the bdsm section. My story,

Student Library, is a little less romantic - the narrator's a man - but it is good imho. Love to hear what you think of it.

Sincerely, ManhattanMaster. https://www.literotica.com/s/student-library