All Comments on 'Brighton Graduate Ch. 01'

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dfwlisadfwlisaabout 16 years ago
Very nice...

Loved the pace, and the descriptions. Very nice details and nicely written.

Love to see more, where will this lead, what will he teach her? What will she teach him?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
need an editor

this is a really good story - just a few distracting things -

I thought you were a dancer!" Walter exclaimed. "You look like a dancer." And she did. She had strong firm logs leading up to reasonably wide hips

"logs" I think you meant to be legs.

billc393billc393about 16 years ago
Well done. . .

Great pace, and I didn't get lost in the details. You did a nice job of blending his, and her, arousal and passion into the story.

The sex was definitely hot... I hope she wears him down to the nub!!

phakewphakewalmost 14 years ago
all I can say is "WOW!"

this is one of the best writen stories I've read to date. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great read!

Love the details! Good story that's already made me wet...

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 8 years ago
Amazing Story!

Thanks for posting!!!

rightbankrightbankabout 7 years ago
New experiences

for both of them.

bunny4medbunny4medalmost 6 years ago

I loved the whole series

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****That was a very entertaining HOT AZZ story. Thanks for sharing.

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