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All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 00'

by merlainealyssa

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Your Story

Has the alluring bitterness of dark chocolate and that's too hard to resist. I look forward to the next chapter.

Best wishes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow

You got my attention so far. Very intriguing. Its dark and brooding. I like it. There's an air of mystic to it and I can't wait to read the next chapter(s).

PennLadyPennLadyalmost 15 years ago
Intriguing start

Nicely set up. I can't wait for Gabriel to save the girl...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
A nasty look at real life

Some girls are not as fortunate as others, and indeed live life in so desperate conditions.The author is opening the ugly side of society that some may not want to see. Thanks........Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
It can be a harsh soulless world,

and this opening gets it spot on. Very skilfully written, this looks like being a fine story. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

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