All Comments on 'Broken Plumbing'

I enjoyed the story,well written for an author(ess)on their fourth submission.This is what easy reading erotica is about.No upsetting the moralists,no extreme sex,and no extreme profanities.More of a romance,than a coupling,but what the heck,looking forward to part two.

andyd46uk.

You could use a good editor to catch your grammar and punctuation mistakes.