All Comments on 'Brother, Sister, Husband, Wife Ch. 05'

by velvet hammer

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goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
it's well written

and very erotic - its just not a story - a retelling of a few anecdotes.

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

This was a nicer more descriptive chapter. I would have preferred her using your name rather than 'brother'. We already know the facts.

tinfoilhattinfoilhatover 1 year ago

This could be so much more.

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