by Cromagnonman
Good story, well paced BUT the ending was incomplete.
What happened to Robyn, did Sasha and hi get married? Did he permentally take over the company, etc.
The pace was absolutely perfect. I was intrigued from the start. I absolutely had to keep reading. The technical business language was somewhat hard to navigate, along with the foreign agencies (I'm an American). Otherwise you can be very proud, an excellently crafted yarn of the finest kind. KUDOS!
A great and interesting story. A rather surprising family, where almost all seem to be corrupt except Rob. Good development of history and interesting ending.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
The good and principled people won and the ashats lost in proportion to their - um ashattedness???" LOL
The brother against brother thing is a classic - of course - but this round went very well for the good guys.
Rob divested himself of a woman who failed to get it so paid - large and a brother who could never have gotten it - so it was given to him heh.
Nice to see the adulterous breather get his comeuppance. But what about the investigation into the money that Robyn stole?
Excellent writing again. However, I found it difficult to get a sense of how long each event was taking. I was not sure if it was days, weeks or months.
Thank you for another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your tale... it's easily worth 5 stars.
Love it when a corrupt pos gets his cake but cant eat it
Being that daddy told him how to go about corruption,, it is possible daddy had things set up during his reign also
Maybe next chapter could be about Sasha and Robert exposing Daddy as well
No mater what happens ,, do NOT let him lose Sasha and return to the other user BITCH Robyn