All Comments on 'Brotherly Love'

I would sure like to read more!!

nice clit hanger!! ;)

Come on ! You needed to give us more on your first chapter.

next time, give us a bigger page or two !

That was kind of a great ending. More. There's gotta be more.

Yes, a very nice start in the 1st chapter. Obviously, since Aaron gave his younger sister who was unaware of her feelings and how to act on them plus the app now to use and then finishing with the look on her face "O" ...

Hopefully, Squirt will have to ask him to show her more and he should.

I think the next chapter will be very HOT for all ......... cannot wait. Thank You !!

The story was too short and there was no sense of conclusion. It was a disappointing tease. You need to add more next time

gave it a 5 instead of the 2 the story deserved

Promising start, would like to see where it goes.

This could be expanded on in so much more detail.

Give it a go.

Beautifully written. This definitely is a piece that I would love to see a second chapter added on to. You've left my brother and me wanting more. . .

It was a nice tease. There's nothing wrong with a short story. Could this be fleshed out? Yes. Does it have to be? Never. I enjoyed it.

You ask for feedback its been almost a year wheres the next chapter come on

Oh fuck me!! Where's chapter two?!? You're killing me! All that great buildup, me looking forward to something really juicy here and BAM! Dead end! Damn :(

Like Mike2501 said . . . . . Where's the rest??

I voted 2 stars for a great beginning/buildup . . . . but, without a follow up, it's just rubbish.

Hands on teaching his little sister how to cum

Then let lil sister make him cum

Then oral sex on each other

Then cuming together

By that time the two other girl would join in.

Is there no story site where you don't have to pretend people who are clearly eleven or twelve years old are actually eighteen? Every young person depicted on this site is necessarily a retard.