All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 02'

by LostInAFantasy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Oops!!

Hope she tells her brother it was ok for him to let loose in her because she's on birth control or better yet she wants to have her brothers children.

Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearabout 14 years ago
Loved it

I liked the progression and the slight force that her brother used while she was sucking him. I think this can progress into a really good relationship with her learning a few more things.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sorry, but nothing creative in this chapter

I'm sure you can do better. Just don't go down the "pregnant sister" path, that plot has been done to death. Maybe you could have Shawn discover his sister is ALREADY a slut doing at least a dozen guys, and she's just been yanking both his cock, and his chain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
dissapointed

very dissapointed that he wasn't pissed off that she lost her virginity to his suposed best friend seems to me he would be pissed and want nothing to do with her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Its OK

Not good not bad just ok gave it a 3

horny2doithorny2doitover 4 years ago

Yes, a horny sister and brother :) Now that she's ridden his hard cock and they both have cum; they should compare notes and keep going. Hopefully, she'll bang him senseless next time and cum all over him to mark him as her ?? Thanks. Great start.

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