All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters Ch. 05'

i've been reading this series as soon as it comes out, i just can't wait. i like the slow buildup, it's really nice. keep on writing!

I am the same way i cant wait to read more, keep going

please continue!

thanks people for the comments.. also leave your email adress if you want me to reply to feedback you mail me otherwise I can't reply and I try to reply to everyone who writes me.. There is more, I've kinda outlined the next chapter in my head already just need to write it.. Thanks again!

Love the series so far :)

Please keep going

I was totally turned on when Carmen was sitting on the bed and things started heating up between her and her brother. Like when she was basically giving him a hand-job and was just about to suck his dick. That was very intense. made me mad when the older sister interrupted. We need Chapter 6 yesterday! :D

I keep checking back for the next chapter.

This is great, truly one of the best stories I ever have read. Can’t wait for coming parts!

JK

Has this story been abandoned?

Really good story, very erotic. I'd just ask that you use a spell checker if possible. For example, a saw the word "swopped" a lot of time. It's supposed to be swApped.

Also, you might want to add a separating line when we end up later in a day. Like one minute the characters are in the living room in the middle of the day and the next paragraph they're getting up the next morning. Maybe just put *** between those paragraphs or ----- to show that time as passed.

The same could be said when changing locations, like when you are switching from Cindy at her house to Carmen at hers.

Those are just minor annoyances because otherwise, your story is top notch!

They see pix, PIX, OF HIM; he sees pix of them, BFD!

u gotta keep going can't stop at ch 5 please continue

This classic saga was a real turn-on. Keep up the good work.

That is a fucking amazingly hot story you have to continue it! Probably the best series I have read, the detail of the story telling is pretty amazing.🔥🔥🔥🔥

Definitely needs more! And in a league of its own for hotness. 🔥🔥🔥

My single complaint, the chapters are out of numbered order. Confused me at first.

It sucks

Your bullshit disclaimed doesn't excuse the fact that you suck at polishing a story. Names are swapped, tenses not correct, spelling errors, and wrong words because you're too lazy to proof read even your own jack off material. Pathetic and signals the lack of understanding as an author the process required to engage and maintain a readers interest. Your story is like walking through a broken road tripping and stumbling like a tool.