by robertreams
I really like this story and hope the boys soon find themselves away from the war and in a place of safety where they can live in peace. Somehow, though, I keep getting the feeling of a Brokeback Mountain ending. I hope I'm wrong.
I am in awe of your gift for words and your ability to transport the reader (me) to an entirely different time and reality. This and the last chapter were a joy to read.
Your characters are so richly drawn, complex and fascinating. Your one mission in life should be to write, write, and then write even more.
Thank You!
Ab
Beautiful story. Erotic, sensual, descriptive, sexual and a true love story. Just amazingly well written! Thank you!