All Comments on 'Brown Eyes'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
really nice.

for a first story, I simply loved it.

great detail of character and story.

great read overall..

keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
An incredible turn on

You had me at the first sentence! Wonderful story especially for a first time. Keep writing, you'll be a success with every story. Good luck!

CourtneysSubCourtneysSubabout 5 years ago

Please please please continue this story

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Good story...i was expecting K to be her girl and they were role playing

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