All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 17'

This was worth waiting for. I will savor it while I await the next installment. It takes a very special person to write like this - a person who understands and can articulate the essence of love. Love makes even great sex better. Assuredly, the best is yet to, ummm..., cum. (Sorry)

After each installment, I find myself eagerly looking forward to the next chapter to come. The immediate next step is fairly obvious; I'm curious as to how you're going to handle the Martin aspect of the whole thing.

-- KK in Texas

Enough of this rambling and going out, this story has lost its shelf life. So have enough forthought to stop.

You have done a very good job, not only in your writing but also in the developement of the story line. I'm waiting calmly for the next chapter. "Hurry up will, ya"

I'm still loving it. Those who can't appreciate your writing style should wait until it is all posted before reading it. It's like one of the old radio serials with each chapter leaving us hanging in anticipation. Great job! PW

A lovely last moment of romance before things get torrid. I thought this was a beautiful chapter and look forward to the next, Kathi!