All Comments on 'Bubble Bath'

That was a very well done story, erotic and interesting.

MEH

You provide a thorough description allow we readers an understanding and visual of your words. Many thanks - L

Does this make her Foam Cummin Queen ?

Ok jokes aside, it was funny and entertaining and sexy and perhaps just a little disturbing.... I loved it!

Erotic and short. Just right..!!..Perfect.

The simplicity of this idea added to the genius of it. It is known that you can certainly write a succubus, but to be able to "summon" one this well from nearly any scenario is demonstrated wonderfully here. This story is in fact "erotic horror" both elements are here, and it makes for some confusing and conflicted feelings from the reader.

Hot, erotic, sexy, dreamy... and dreadfully eerie. Keep doing this shit.

bubbles the succubus lolz awesome

damn! that was erotic! it also kinda scared me a little...

Manyeyedhydra, you are truly an artist of the writing world. Keep up the good work, thank you so much.

Oh my goodness!! this story was really great! keep up the good work.

i am really enjoying working through your succubus stories.

Manyeyedhydra, you are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. I look forward to each of your stories. Great job with erotica and I hope you will keep it up.

purchase ANYTHING from a new age shop....sheesh! Poor Bastard, he ought to come back as a spook and scare the crap outta her boyfriends/girlfriends. That'll fuck up her day. LOL. Good Story