All Comments on 'Buddies??'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I'm surprised

Ron and Cindy didn't use the word "honey" with each other to the very end, since they used on each other, even when they supposedly argue over why they should or should not have sex with others outside of the marriage... <p>

contrary to your misconceived notion here, STDs and HIV don't happen only if you have sex with people you and/or your spouse know! In fact, it's safer with people you know, since you DO KNOW them and know what kind of disease they may or may not have; it's with strangers who are promiscuous, like you, that chances of one of the partners spreading those lovely little critters around it greatest. <p>

The story is not very serious, nor the subject matter of getting disease like HIV being seriously treated by the author. Doctors, by the way, will NEVER discuss someone else HIV with you before they discuss it with the infected person first and have their permission, explicitly or for medical purposes. Even if that other person is your spouse. You may go pick up their lab report, your spouse's test... but the doctor discussing it WITH YOU while you're there? Come on, be serious. <p>

that silliness, since it is so unreal and not believable, is not as annoying as knowing a man who "worked out" a quasi "open marriage" with his wife years ago, and who's been desked for many years due to eye injury NEVER found a chance to make sure the "open marriage" issue was resolved way before some "re-unions"... <p>

and then, even after he finds out she fucks a former marine who was known to fuck around and likely have diseases, he couldn't say any hting coherent, to her, to himself, to anyone ---- about cheating, STDs and HIV being serious issues in cheating activities, etc. --- for months until AFTER he's been told of his wife's HIV in the clinic??? <p>

that's just gibberish. you enjoy writing, so why not write something thta is remotely sophisticated, believable, and/or intelligent?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
forced contrived crap

absurd. After the open marriage disaster at DC when they get home the husband decides to CONTINUE it? LOL... ROTFLOL

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This is a sick twisted joke. The idiot wimp husband did NOTHING for weeks even though he knew and had evidence. Waiting for the Video meant Cindy would get HIV.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good

Great story and well written. Thanks for sharing.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 14 years ago
a New Low in absurd Moronic plots

This is a mind bogglingly BAD story in every. Never mind the HIV angle. The open marriage premise/misunderstading is truly idiotic and not believeable.

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The idiot wimp husband is desk bound in the Air Force for years. Then Ron is home for several more years BEFORE the DC gathering.

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<b>The idea that the open marriage ideas had not been mentioned or discussed one time in ALLLLLLLL that time is just too far fetched. </b>

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In fact the very scene of how Cindy tells him at the Party and his amazing inability to catch up a woman in 3-4 Inch heels is just well absurd.

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But what makes Ron wimp and idiot is his reaction to the Cindy's perposterous story. He actually thinks the wife really did "misunderstand" that that open marriage idea was still in effect.

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Ron & Cindy agreed to this because he was going to be deployed overseas or on ship for months at a time.

and any sex partner Cindy chose was NOT be anyone he knew. Cindy MIGHT have made 1 mistake but this shaky premise is blown away by the winds of reality when she some how forgets BOTH rules that she agreed to.

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<b>even worse Ron the idiot husband never grasped the bigger implications of the wife's lie about seeing the doctor for STDs. That lie SHOULD of told him immediatelty that Cindy knew the open marriage agreement was no longer in effect. </b>

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2 + 2 =4

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Lastly given Ron's intense and visceral hatred of Larry his entire reaction and build up to the confrontation with Cindy takes waaaaaaay too long. Ron didnt need the god dam video tapes. It is kind of inconsistent.

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In fact I kind of agree with a previous poster. The slow reaction by Ron -- even though he knew his wife was calling Larry even though he found receipts for the Shearton-- may have been when she got HIV.

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The marriage was surely over... but cindy wouldnt be dead

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
US soldier is wimp

ha ha ha,stupid

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
just a real

sad story about people who never grow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So... the mom had been fucking her kids?

That's why you thought they might have HIV? Or she had been sharing needles with them? You can't transmit it from a toilet seat.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 14 years ago
A reasonable story...

I can't give it 100% as I didn't "love" it, however, I disagree wtih Harry and others - to me this is a credible story. It could have ended with, "Consequences are a bitch." Reality is that today you screw the wrong person you get HIV. I've known irrational stubborn manipulative women who behaved just as badly as Cindy in this story (or worse).

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More, please

The plot is worthy of further exploration from the wife's perspective, and you have the writing ability to do that effectively. Unfortunately, others out there insist on reading submissions with an ey toward criticism rather than simply enjoying the story as it unfolds. They need to be ignored. Please continue the narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Maybe I'm wrong, but....

... I've never heard of anyone testing positive for HIV three days from the point of infection. It can take anywhere from one to six months; sometimes, even longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good writing some slow parts but ok to read

I would like to comment to one of the repleys. YOU CAN GET OR RECEIVE AIDS OTHER THEN SEX>>>>> holding your child and kissing a cut or scraped knee to make it better.blowing on food to cool it off allways get some spray from mouth on food . holding your child when both are crying you see if you want to know more go to work at my hospital and ill show you lots of dumbass's that have killed there kids with aids.Because they want to be selfrightoues and fuck around and come home to there kids and hug and play with them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Enjoyable pulp friction

You're allowed to contrive a little in this category, and that sharpened the story, it all added up, however implausible the links. Talk about stretching my credulity, author. Marriage Agreement for fucks sake. Risky idea considering the whole story sits on it, but i thought it worked. A very well laid line, 'He invoked it once. She invoked it twice.'

If she admitted to two extra marital fucks, you can safely double that. That's a few nights out on the town looking for dick and she's not going to give up that kind of thrill in a hurry. Not unless she gets fucking aids or somethi...oh. Don't want to give the plot away.

I bet the noble but weak, nasty husband(well drawn character)had a sordid, faceless fuck with some whore in a foreign parlour. Obviously didn't do much for his ego.

I think the author sold me out on the last page, but the thread of the story was good to the end. Thanks for the entertainment Mister Bones...Mancelt.

DeckviewDeckviewover 14 years ago
You write really well, but the plot

has way too many holes as described by the other commentors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
stupid lil fact

loved your sotry , but HIV doesnt show up till 6 months after infection with regular test , theres an advanced test that can detect it at 3 months but thats it... u cud replace hiv aids with herpes or sumn if u want to make it more believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OK, but ...

OK, it takes up to 6 months before AIDS will show, especially as this happened in the 1990's. It is actually quite hard to get it, unless you engage in anal sex, or have an open wound.

Cindy did not make sense to me, at least as you protrayed it. Her first meeting at their conference was really unbelievable. I had suspected that you would have had her meet him earlier.

I have known individuals with open marriages, not something that I condone. Jerry used to say that his ring was good for the block they lived on. His wife gave up that llfestyle after their first was born. That said, not even he would have flounted it so blantantly in his spouse's face as Cindy did.

Anyway, why would she blame Larry? She didn't use protection or insist that he did. Really, your story just didn't seem very believable. Her husband told her he was discharged due to sexual misconduct.

The cap of stupidity was the forced reconciliation by his current wife. What planet was she from?

So, why did I give you 75%? You write well and although I ended up dissapointed, it still was enjoyable. Thanks! - Ttom

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good

It is a good story. I look forward to more

bigchefwaynebigchefwayneover 14 years ago
Hearing Her Side of the Story

would be a good read. This was a tight, well conceived and written story. As usual, Harry in VA's attempted trashing of the story proves it is good. Harry is the type that feels Twain and Hemingway were not good enough and pretends to prefer Tolstoy, Dostoevsky and Chekhov even though he has not read any of their works either in English or Russian.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Well Written but

Kind of a shame for his 2nd wife to be burdened with someone who didn't value the agreed upon conditions of marriage.<P>

He green lighted her fucking around and did so himself so there was no one to relate to - to have sympathy for except for the second wife.<P>

Then had she gotten the whole story about his open marriage that caused the entire problem she wouldn't have respected him or committed herself to the idiot. She was the only one who didn't deserve what they got.<P>

The author is quite talented but continues to saddle himself with below level subjects and characters to spend his time on.<P>

I wonder if that will ever change? Selfishly I hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Aid Testing

Source;

http://data.unaids.org/pub/FactSheet/2008/20080527_fastfacts_testing_en.pdf

What is a HIV test?

A HIV test is a test that reveals whether HIV is present in the body. Commonly-used HIV

tests detect the antibodies produced by the immune system in response to HIV, as it is

much easier (and cheaper) to detect antibodies than the virus itself. Antibodies are

produced by the immune system in response to an infection.

For most people, it takes three months for these antibodies to develop. In rare cases, it

can take up to six months. During this “window period” of early infection a person is at

their most infectious.

nyminusnyminusover 14 years ago
Yes by all means

Let's hear Cindy's side of the story...especially how she felt when she read the death sentence. Good story by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AIDS transmission--from a CDC Fact Sheet

One of the anonymous comments contains some misinformation regarding Aids transmission. The CDC Fact Sheet states:

HIV has been found in saliva and tears in very low quantities from some AIDS patients. It is important to understand that finding a small amount of HIV in a body fluid does not necessarily mean that HIV can be transmitted by that body fluid. HIV has not been recovered from the sweat of HIV-infected persons. Contact with saliva, tears, or sweat has never been shown to result in transmission of HIV.

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Major Communication Disaster?

It was enjoyable for those who read for pleasure. There are enough plot holes to more than justify Harry's RANT. The "hero" is a full scale wimp. Things should have ended when she insisted on maintaining the open marriage in a slightly modified form... Though why she bothered arguing this is beyond me since she had no intention obeying any restriction. Their son was the only non-wimp! I am a sci fi

fan but in the historical context the HIV detection bit was too much!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
gimme a break

An author finally gives in to the "give the trollop a dose of the plague!" pleas, and rather than spooge all over the screen in gleeful abandon the troll squad starts whipping out their AIDs faq sheets and reports to see who's is biggest. He killed the rancid cum bucket of a disease ridden whore slut bitch what more can a good troll ask for? Oh snap! I've got it! The husband didn't marry his daughter at the end. Well that was a wast of time. NEXT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You don't write well.

You need an editor. Your and you're are used incorrectly. Your dialogue stinks. Those that say you write well are either idiots or just happy to have a cheating bitch die.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Utterly ridiculous

Why wouldn't you atleast invest the time to make the story even remotely plausible? this was just so fucking stupid.

You actually want your readers to beleive that after decades of marriage the couple have no idea if it is ok to fuck others or not. blbones, you're a fucking moron. Stop being so lazy as a writer... read your own story BEFORE you post it and ask yourself if you, not some fucking idiot that you've never met, if YOU could do any of the stuff in your story, and if the answer is NO, then don't post it! It is a waste of our time, and an insult to your readers. When you tell me that this couple behaved this way, I immeditely couldn't give a flying fuck what happens to EITHER one of them... I don't like EITHER OF THEM. So, your story becomes a complete miss. Can't you get this? Don't you read books? watch good movies?

daluentdaluentover 14 years ago
idiots

Some idiot wrote that doctors would not tell the spouse the wife tested positive for HIV. There is a LAW in every state that says the spouse must be informed immediately. That is to prevent the spread of this deadly disease. Get a law book and look it up idiot!!! Luis

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very disappointing

I expected better from you than this crap! HIV? 15 yrs of marriage then *POW* all of a sudden she's cheating? Throw in her sudden drop in IQ and I'm wondering if you even read the story before you posted it?

sexmatesexmateover 14 years ago
WTF!

The .45 would have been in my hand and I would have killed them both before things even got that far!It would have been handled after Washington trip.

The 10-15 years sentence would have been worth it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Motherfucker

You are a motherfucker. Stop writing and fuck your mother in her asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good enough story

although a little implausible. The wife had to be pretty stupid to carry on with this affair, knowing the husbands opinion of the guy. Still, I found it a pretty good read, and it's only a story, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You write a story about a disgusting...

selfish, evil, woman... and yet, your readers are suppose to care about what happens?? What planet do you live on? If you can't figure out how to create a reasonable balance in your stories, then don't bother writing, you're just not good enough. This story, is a waste of effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good story

Real and an everyday event in some lives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story ...

And Yes... please write some more.

huedogghuedoggalmost 13 years ago
wow....that wasn't bad for BiBones

the man was a man, he didn't fuck her cheating ass, and he kicked her ass out. The husband moved on and didn't wimp up like most of your stories. Nice one 4 stars

DunaDunaover 12 years ago

1. Good consequence story. The husband did not like the anal sex so he was lucky, because the HIV spreads easier through anal than vaginal way.

2. Without protection sex is a danger with promiscous people. Cindy was not too clever.......

UndrApprctdUndrApprctdabout 12 years ago
A Story that Uses Aids as Revenge Can Never Get More than 1 Star

I enjoyed the story up until the supposed infection; you should be ashamed of yourself. No one deserves that...you pretty much made her a martyr.

ParPlus10ParPlus10about 12 years ago
AIDS is serious and so is cheating!

I have no problem with you using AIDS. Most authors don't pull it off, but in this case you did it well. The ending showed just how horrible the results of cheating can be.

Yes most people survive HIV for years today. But that doesn't reduce the impact on their lives and the lives of everyone they are close to.

Cindy was not a martyr. That term improperly used so often. But we did feel a little sorry for her.

Unlike the West Virginia mountain boys, I don't think that someone who cheats deserves to die. But, there are consequences for everything we do. So tough luck Cindy.

ParPlus10ParPlus10about 12 years ago
Sorry, one more thing.

The doctor absolutely would have discussed the test with the husband. The privacy act has everyone fill out a form. I filled that form out about ten times last year from all my visits. It indicates who doctor can release information to.

While the author did not explicitly say that this form was filled out, we're all beyond the first grade and should be able to figure those things out.

The doctor would have wanted the husband to get tested right away as well.

The only thing that bothers me is knowing how recent the infection was.

Blood cells are replaced every 120 days. But I don't know if they can be accurate to last Tuesday.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
BUDDIES AND CARRIERS

both able to pass it forward. TK U MLJ LV NV

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Ultimate Revenge

Cindy the cheating whore scum slut cunt twat was the worst kind of unfaithful wife. She fucked Larry her husbands enemy and most hated marine comrade and continued to even after finding this out. Fucking cunt needed the asshole's horsecock. The worst type of betrayal. Larry deserved what he got but Cindy's should have been worse. If she lived longer in pain that would have felt better. If I was Ron I'd make it a point to frequent her grave and piss on it and maybe take a dump on it once and a while. Cheating cunt is burning in hell. Fuck her.

FUCK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
traitor

a smoked cock, a buggered cornhole full of jizz, betrayed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
When?

Still looking for Cindy's story.

cantbuymycantbuymyover 11 years ago
dont

dont give a fuck about cindy's story. the lying cheating aids infected cunt in the story deserved to die in pain and agony.

solotorosolotoroover 11 years ago
Not bad

I don't think you put enough effort into the motivation aspect of Cindy's cheating. The big dick thing isn't enough. If all she wanted was a big dick she could have found another with hubby's permission and not risk her marriage. Why in the world would she feel the need to fight with hubby about his opinion about Larry? If it's just about his big cock she could have just kept quiet and fucked him. Why should she care what hubby thinks of him. Nope, big cock is too simplistic a reason for her actions. Also, there is no such thing as a marine pilot, they are aviators (just ask one) and they don't deploy on carriers. They are land based, if you can call some of those islands land. The carriers have very limited space and it is used by naval aviators and it is too expensive to train all those marine aviators to do carrier landings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
those loving to see the wife die need help

as far as the story goes . to many holes. legally he cannot throw her out of their home.

what is did was wrong and died in the end from this slow progress desease. today medicine cans controll it deadly effect and prolong your life . as far as she was concern you reap what you sow.. she deserved her destruction

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Thanks

Your best. Can't wait to read her side of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great read!

Thanks for sharing.

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 11 years ago

Cheating cunt deserved it but she should have immediately put a bullet into her own head. As for seeing her, testifying for her, paying for a lawyer, she would have been on her own.

That video now titled "cheating whore's last fuck" would have been on the net the next day with digital versions e-mailed to everyone she knows.

But cuckie husband's agreement was pure shit.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Got what she asked for -

But does anyone actually deserve to die from AIDS for being stupid?

I doubt it -- most of you have probably never seen an AIDS patient going term9nal nor the 2 or 3 admissions before they actually die - so don't get all holier than tho - no humna being deserves that unless they have been such a heinous villain to have cost pothgers their lives first - not their happiness or comfort but their heart stopping lives.

Pain yep - disease sure - the horror of knowing what they did cost them everything they value yep - but that about covers it.

Thanks for the story - I do not care why she did it other than she was willful and stupid - especially after the first time - she lied and cheated and died - enough.

OverthefallsOverthefallsover 10 years ago
A cheaters reward.

People are always writing stories about cheaters and cuckolds that act without regards to the reality of STD's and Aids. Good job at writing a reality check for those that think nothing can go wrong if they cheat. Depressing, but well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wimp

Was a good story till you had to screw it up in the end. Become friends again? Not a f.....g chance. Die bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Unbelievable and weak plot.

I'm having trouble reconciling between a jealous loving husband and a husband who worked out a quasi open marriage with his wife to fly a fighter jet. He knows that every time he flies a jet, his wife would be flying a cock, and he's fine with it. Yet when his wife exercised her open marriage option in DC he's NOT fine with it. Is his jealously turned off when he's in the cockpit?

The fact that the husband had an open marriage with his wife doesn't get a lot of sympathy from me when his wife exercised her option in DC. He shouldn't have a problem with her straying ever if he's fine with it while he is deployed. This is one of those situations where there is no gray area. I found myself agreeing with Cindy that his jealousy is ridiculous. If he truly has a problem with her straying (while not deployed) then he reaped what he sowed.

My advice is to take out anything that would weaken the tension in the plot. While the open marriage does explain much of the plot, he also weakens it. 3 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sad story

Back in the '80's something similar happened to me. Thankfully we didn't have kids. Growing up, I loved the girl next door. We were boyfriend/girlfriend off and on all through primary and intermediate school, but when we got to high school, she dumped me for someone else. I just about died and I'll be honest, I cried like a baby when my mom came to my room and asked what had happened. After explaining, she told me that someday I'd get over it. I didn't agree but also didn't disagree with her.

As we went through HS together, it was obvious she was one of the girls that spread her legs for her boyfriend. I heard him talking in the locker room and mentioning to his buddies, she couldn't get enough of his cock. Pretty much anytime and anywhere they could get together, they fucked. Even at school a few times, I found out later. Everyone was patting him on the back and telling him what a stud he was. Of course, my heart broke even further.

Then he cheated on her. She broke it off and was devastated, everyone around school could tell. After a month or so of listening to him talk about how bad he needed to get laid again, he finally talked her into getting back together. Then he let everyone know he was getting it before school, after school and in the evenings. Who knew the girl next door I loved dearly was such a horndog. He loved to tell about how wet her cunt was when she found out they could fuck, by the time she could skin out of her pants, she was running down her leg. Well, he fucked up again and that time she broke it off for good.

I noticed her making some moves toward me but I just couldn't have anything to do with her so she started going out with another guy. I found out later it was because once you start fucking, you can't stop and this guy was buried in her cunt the first time they went out together. Cutting to the chase, we eventually got together and believe it or not, married. She wanted to be a housewife and be there when I got home, and I had no problem with that. I wanted to wait about 10 years to have kids, she wanted to have them right away. We compromised on 5 years. Sex was incredible, her boyfriend was right, she couldn't get enough cock. When she was horny, she did anything she could to get me up and going.

After we married her cheater boyfriend joined the Navy and shipped out. Neither of us heard anything about him, his folks lived just down the road from where we lived. I knew she still had feelings for him but said it was over. Then one day after we'd been married about 5 years she started talking about going off birth control and starting our family. About that time, I happened to see her old boyfriend was home on leave, he was driving around in his old car stored at his folks house, the same one he used to fuck my wife in for years. I never thought much about it until one day at work, when we broke down. I was a logger and the log loader blew a cylinder. We were going to be down for a week. It was early and we headed home.

The crew bus picked me up every morning at 4 a.m. at the end of my driveway and I would walk out to meet them, about a 1/4 mile. When they dropped me off that morning, about 10 a.m., I noticed a car sitting in my driveway as I walked home. Yep, it was Tom's. It is hard to explain the pain that hits you in the gut when you realize what is going on. So I won't. Suffice to say, I threw up.

I also need to mention how my wife, when she would answer any questions about her and Tom, about their sex life, she just told me he fucked her from the back, either doggy style or just bent over the hood of his car. I never understood why, while I enjoyed her doggy style, I like face to face so I could look into her beautiful eyes and face while we made love. I loved to kiss her and suck her tits and make passionate love to her. To me, that was love.

I learned why he banged her from the back when I walked in through the back door. He had her bent forward over the arm of the couch and had reached around, grabbed her by the nipples and used them to pull her backward. I thought they might tear off but she didn't seem to mind, she was panting at him to keep fucking her. Christ, in the few seconds I watched, I truly believed he'd pull those things off her tits. No wonder, after we got married, that her nipples were so long. I thought it was the way she was built, but he had stretched them. Erect, I'd say they were probably a 1/2" long, he was pulling them at least 1 1/2" to 2" outward.

I had to backtrack to go into our bedroom. I pulled down our two ratty old suitcases and started filling them with clothes. When they were full, I could still hear them going at it and I grabbed my .45acp and shoved it in my waistband before walking out. I must have stood in the living room for 10 seconds before either saw me and then Julie screamed and he shouted. Unfortunately, he was getting his nut and when she pulled away to cower on the couch, he was shooting strands of cum from a cock that looked like it belonged in a movie, even though he'd fired most of it into her cunt.

I set the two suitcases down and pulled out my pistol. I told them both to get the hell out and pushed the suitcases over toward my soon to be exwife. It was her clothes I packed, I sure as hell wasn't going to give up a home that was a gift from my folks. She screamed and cried, asking me to forgive her, telling me we could work it out, she'd never do it again. I calmly told her to get out and I'd have everything shipped to her folks house. That earned me more tears from her and she cried about not wanting to go home. I told her that if she wanted, she could move in with her lover, Tom had earned having her.

I was more empty than I could have believed when I watched his car leaving down our driveway. True to my word, I boxed her shit up and anything we'd bought together, including our bed, to her folks house. She tried to talk to me but I refused and had divorce papers sent to her. Her dad talked me into letting her have her say and she'd sign the papers. I agreed, took the papers with me and went to their house. She promised it was the only time it had ever happened, but I didn't believe her and told her that a neighbor had seen him there before. That earned fresh tears and she admitted she'd fucked him the day before too. A little pressure and she admitted during that first time, he'd fucked and shot his load into her 3 times that day. I think her folks were sicker over it than I was.

Our divorce went through and it wasn't until about a year later, I heard from someone that my ex was sick. This was before anything really knew anything about AIDS and it turned out that he'd not only given her Syphilis, but AIDS also, something he'd picked up in a port. I saw her about a year later and she looked like death warmed over. It turned out by that time, Tom had already died. This was before drugs were available that were helpful.

Julie had caught me sitting in our local diner. She asked if she could sit with me and while I was instantly enraged, I agreed. Trying to be a gentleman, I listened as she apologized for messing up her life and mine. She didn't try and shirk her responsibility, and admitted Tom had been to our house three times, including when I caught them. She remembered about his big dick (I'd estimate over 8" and very very thick) and it didn't take him long to get her panties off, explaining she must be a horrible person.

I let her have her say, to unburden herself. She knew she was going to die, although I didn't. When she was done, I told her I forgave her but would never forget. She smiled but when I mentioned that I would also never forget that we'd never have the three children we'd planned on, never have that family with the picnics, campouts and trips we'd planned, she lost it. When she ran crying from the café, it was the second from last time I'd ever see her alive.

I'd been introduced to a beautiful young girl and when I saw Julie that time, we were already planning our marriage. It was about 6 months after Julie and I talked, that Amy and I married in a huge church wedding, at the only church in town. When we walked out the door with family and friends throwing rice on us, I happened to see Julie sitting on a park bench across the street watching. When I pulled out in our car with the JUST MARRIED signs on it and cans trailing from the bumper, I saw Julie get up and walk slowly down the sidewalk and it was the last time I'd lay eyes on her.

Amy was pregnant with our first when I got a phone call from Julies parents. It had taken her another 6 months after our wedding before she passed away. Amy insisted we go to her funeral and we did, paying our last respects. Afterward, her parents came up and thanked us for coming and when Julies mom saw Amy's stomach and her obvious pregnancy, she burst into tears and ran. John, Julies dad, just shook my hand and whisper in my ear.

"That should have been your and Julies baby."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5***** comment!

@Anon You saved the honor of the anons!

A lot of posters bashed the anons they can not write any story and you wrote an excellent consequence story!

Thank you!

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 8 years ago
Second time through...

Five stars. I guess that's what you get when you agree to an open marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
1*

Unbelievable. Huge plot holes. And in the end hubby was a fucking wimp.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
@drbeamer

Sucked any ass, lately? What a stupid story. Aids, blah, blah blah, giant dick, death, pussy husband, marines, blah, blah, blah. What a worthless waste of my time this was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

illiterate cuck shit.

Rc68Rc68over 7 years ago
Ok

Just the way all selfish cheating sluts should die, diseased and alone.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ugh

Your stories all portray immoral sluts that lose their Goddamned minds when they cheat with a big cock.

Seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
why

be friends, she was a whore and disrespected him severely.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story of the tragic consequences of cheating. Wife was total slut, but husband was at fault for agreeing to the open marriage in the first place. Such a stupid decision that cost them everything. Wonder if he had same agreement with Marlene?

calflashcalflashalmost 6 years ago
what a waste

Why did he waste all his efforts even after the initial transgression? She violated all the rules on top of the affair itself which had for all common sense meant for their earlier life situation. Also her bullet was a waste as Larry would have soon died anyway.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 5 years ago
Well told story!

I'll never understand a wife like that, but you told the story exceptionally well. It was a great read.

etchiboyetchiboyabout 5 years ago
Wow! Justice served all around.

5-stars & Favorite

etchiboyetchiboyabout 5 years ago
Hell yeah, I want Cindy’s story.

Fuck, if just to get what Larry said to turn her to the dark side.

Really I’d just like BIBones to write more. Sad it’s been a while.

etchiboyetchiboyabout 5 years ago
Why? Why? Why? Are my comments moderated?

???

Bebop3Bebop3almost 5 years ago
Seldom have I read

a story so chock-full of stupidity.

This jumped the shark as soon as he didn't stand up and say 'hell no' as soon as his wife told him that she was leaving to fuck some other guy.

Her reactions throughout and his to her were absolutely ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Open marriage

That's the moral of the story, open marriage sounds interesting, but is death to a marriage.

calflashcalflashover 4 years ago
agreement

Why did they continue the "agreement" after initially agreeing it was terminated? It should have been the red flag to convince him to end the sham of a marriage. Ron should have seen it coming. As is common with many lying cheating wives on this site, she was stupid enough to believe her own lies.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
this story is why willing cuckolds should die slow painful deaths

being retired military, why would you ever suggest and open marriage. Your in harms way and the last thing on your mind is who is your slut wife banging. Then when he was discharged. She continued the open marriage because by then his was already a cuckold. In her mind why stop now. Then she cuckold him in front of everybody like the whore she was. And the fact that he called himself a marine, knowing the code that they live by. That he didn't dump the whore speaks volumes about his idea of marriage. He should have dumped her at the reunion. And the rest of the story is just your typical bibone cuckold loving shit, (1)

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Totally agree with Huedogg2 open marriage is not a marriage

Read 1 star

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Huedogg2 said it all

No marriage if open why bother

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Again

Stupid.woman paid a heavy price for her cheating. At least she took Larry with her.

AlericAlericabout 3 years ago

I'm surprised that Ron didn't go after Larry through the courts. Intentionally infecting another person with AIDS is considered some degree of murder in most states.

Hoplite122Hoplite122almost 3 years ago

I greatly enjoyed this piece, and, clearly, would love to read Cindy's story too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Ron's a cuck.

JBird11JBird11over 1 year ago

ITs sad and tragic. I would be interested in Cindy's side of things, she knowingly broke their agreement by sleeping with someone Ron knew, then made things worse by actually cheating. in the end it cost her everything, including her life. I would love to have some insight and her perspective. Thanks for sharing.

Harvey8910Harvey8910over 1 year ago

This was a great story. Ron was so right in not having sex with Cindy as it turned out that Larry infected her with HIV. She died of AIDS as did Larry. Ron survived to marry a wonderful woman and provide a wonderful home for her and the children. This was a great lesson on the consequences of the life choices we make. Cindy threw a loving husband, happy marriage and two lovely children away when she started fucking Larry. What a waste. Great story and I give it 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

WTF!! Only wish I were man enough to talk to a dying women that way. Proud day for the marines.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

That was fucking brutal. I dig it.

orneryonezorneryonez4 months ago

A mother and her children...

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19693 months ago

moral of the story: don't underestimate the power of horse cock.

sorry, need to joke after that. pretty good tale. weird that a wife in a quasi-open marriage would want to keep secrets but don't underestimate...

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