by R E THEGN
I want to thank you for writing this story...it had just the right amount of romance and sex in it coupled with the newness of a budding relationship. I also married my best bud so this story really hit home. Thanks again. Judi
Very good build up. Excellent attention to detail. Please DON'T STOP!
This story is well-written and has a good flow to it. It is as I imagine new love between buddies might happen. I can hardly wait until chapter 2.
I really loved your story. How they hooked up and everything. How she was just a friend who dressed the way she did and he still liked. Great story all in all. Loved it, hope you add another part to tell us how thanksgiving went.
Great character and plot development! I really love this story!
Hopefully you'll write a sequel because my mind's going wild imagining what Thanksgiving Dinner's going to be like!
Being from WV .. close to Morgantown - helped a lot! It's a great story and I can't wait for Ch.2!!!
I really enjoyed this story.....I cant wait to read the next part about thanksgiving dinner and such!
Another fantastic story! It keeps you riveted the whole way through!
PET
Good backgrounder on their relationship, and how they progress. Especially when they resolved their problems before the cabin trip. Would love to see further plot development, and how their relationship deepens. How does this new relationship affect those around them? Are they going to try out something bold at the family gathering? Keep up the work!
I just wanted to let you know how much i thouroughly enjoyed your story,,,both characters very hot and the lovemaking scenes even hotter,,,hope to read more of your wonderful work
GREAT if inexperienced SEX powers a real love story. Buddies as little kids, then devoted friends in high school, then "Hello, Dolly! I'll have what she's having." Flavored with a strong humorous vein, their development into serious lovemaking is right on the mark. God bless them! Gotta love this tale all the way!