All Comments on 'Building A Romance'

A nice little story, and the only obvious clanger was the change from shorts to a short skirt without a mention. Not a big distraction, but an obvious one

Uh Huh, they don't run out of hot water in a four star hotel! Tch, tch!

LOOKS LIKE THE GOOD DOCTOR IS WELL TAKEN CARE OF AND WILL BE FOR A LONG TIME. 5 STARS. I ENJOYED READING THE STORY AGAIN

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

A romantic love story about mature adults rather than the barely 18 year olds is refreshing. Real people dealing with the real world.

But,

I take exception to the multiple references to her hairy bush. For a 50-60 year old woman having hair is not retro it's natural.

good storie keep writing

I hate hairy pussies! I hate getting hair stuck in my teeth! It’s also unhygienic since shit can stick to the pussy hair. Great story. Could have been better if he got to shave her pussy in the story.