All Comments on 'Bullet 01'

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bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Wild

Until chapter 2 showed up with a loving wife classification I did not even think about reading this first chapter. It is well written and exciting thought there is no obvious connection with the title. The sub-title of the second chapter turns the title clearer and makes it look like she was trying to kill him with sex.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SHOW OFFS AND WISE-EN-HEIMERS

and voyeurs galore TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
BANG BANG I AM GETTING SHOT DOWN

bad enough to get shot at and shit at. TK U MLJ LV NV

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
VOYEURS HAVE NEEDS AND NECESSITIES

and sleep, eat and spy on their neighbors, TK U MLJ LV NV

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
Asking for trouble

Don't moan when happens

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Stupid.

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