All Comments on 'Busty Jessica's Gang Shag Ch. 01'

I wish you had just described Jessica as busty and left it at that, and simply used her name throughout the story. For me, the moniker "Busty Jessica" over and over, distracted me and detracted from the story line, making it more cartoonish than I prefer. I enjoy many of your stories, as you describe giving oral pleasure to a woman in wonderful detail. But this story didn't do it for me. Sorry.

although you already know boxy... I loved it - of course;-) what else to expect?;-x

take care

xxx

/bj

Contrary to what was previously said, I find the use of "Busty Jessica" makes her that much more appealing. Aside from that, this story, in my opinion, was excellent written. The amount of detail really amazed me, so much so that I am taking the time to type this all out on a PSP... An astounding feat, indeed. Keep up the outstanding work! :D