by sethp
A master has returned thank you for another great story
there is no erotic in it. it should be something special and not like eating a sandwich. so make a better effort please. this is just a meat market, like those cheap pornflics.
have to agree -- the sex was trivial, inconsequential, similar to watching strangers on youporn. The most emotion shown through out was when Jessica got distraught over her b/f fucking another girl. Even that was pretty minimal.
I think guys would like this story more than women (sorry to be sexist, but most women like a little more depth to their erotica). However, I appreciate the fact that your writing was readable, and not jibber jabber.
get a baseball bat to the gonads! Or the knee cap, that SOB. Glad to see you back publishing stories Sethie -- good job! A very nice tribute to Busty Jessica too :)
Im impressed - you left the wham bam thank you mam group and enetered for the more designated writers !
no matter awaht the rest said - I loved it; but your not getting full points, they were right on one thing though... to little nasty sex... I know you can do more than that :-)
Im impressed - you left the wham bam thank you mam group and enetered for the more designated writers !
no matter awaht the rest said - I loved it; but your not getting full points, they were right on one thing though... to little nasty sex... I know you can do more than that :-)
Jessica is starting her journey into sluthood and will love every inch of the trip. I'm sure she will soon be looking for extra instruction time.
I am... Guilty. I need a Jessica in my life. Looking forward to the rest of the story.