by Otazel
Excellent use of words. You drew the mental image of two close friends breaking down a barrier most of us will never have the nerve to do. Would love to hear how it impacted their relationship and whether there were more sessions.
Details, compelling read, quite unexpected! Just discovered your writing, and looking forward to enjoying more!
I was not sure I was going to like the story and it is not really a story that would appeal to me but your handling of the interactions between the characters is pitch-perfect and drew me in. So much thought was implied behind the actions occurring, so much scenery made clear but implicit - very clever! I feel I have several plausible neighbors like this.
I have being coming back to, and coming to, this story for years and I swear, it never gets old. The whole series is one of the hottest things I've ever read, and it always leaves me a very satisfied customer and mighty inspired for my own writing...
Beautiful! Perfect pacing; lovely, intimate details; two charmingly different personalities and preferences.
This is the second time reading this after about a year, and I wish I could give it another five stars. Simply superb, and simply the best mutual masturbation story ever written.