All Comments on 'But It's Raining Out'

but misleading title; should be Incest/Taboo, even though that would spoil the ending. I am not into the incest story, so I object to being misled. That said, the concept is novel and you should receive a 3 for concept, but I would downgrade that to a 2 for misleading caption.

I give it a 5. It's a clever idea and well written. The twist in the final paragraph does not, in my opinion, quallify it for the Incest category

Taking a leaf from Dinsmore's book I see.

The formatting was a bit strange and I got lost one or two times trying to figure out who was who.

That is my singular problem with this story. I wish there were more stories like it on Lit. It turned me on a whole hell of a lot more than passive descriptions of huge tits and rock hard cocks. Hell, I nearly came in my pants.

More. More! MORE!

When i read 'it's recycling' i couldn't stop laughing.. great fucking story.. thanks so much! :P

The one thing I miss about my ex-wife is that she loved to swallow and was always willing to accommodate

Thanks for a great story