All Comments on 'But We Didn't'

The dialog was great and the story was very believable! 5*

The lovely banter between the two was great. Loved it. Pure and undiluted *****

Great dialogue. The only thing that stood out negatively was "Branna"... was that supposed to have been "Briana"?

No. Branna was what i called her. In the world we live in where people name their kids "Apple, Rumor, Scout" Branna is pretty normal. There are several women with the name.

",,, defiantly ..." and ",,, definitely ..."

As in "It defiantly beats your morning breath."!!

There's a few other errors that a good Proof Reader could have eliminated for you.

Loved it! Could you give us a sequel?

I can tell you do this for a living. Thank you for a great read.

This is the best story I have read in Literotica. It was so real and down to earth. I can hardly way to read more stories as good as this one.

This is def one of the best stories I have read on Lit. Thank you.

I also enjoyed the humor between the lovers.

Wow I was masturbating my pussy is so wet

It could be called erotic humor with the way the character Aaron was portrayed. His attitude on life is like a fresh breath, and made the story fantastic.

Thanks for the read

Good story, Aaron is a great character. Will there be a sequel where Paige gets involved, a threesome maybe?

This deserves more chapters, one of your best stories.

As the other commenters have pointed out, great humor and banter. Would love to see more of these characters. Or more of Aaron at least.

I really enjoyed reading this! I thought the dialogue was well done. I'd love to see more with these characters.

... it was a silly but amusing. I liked it.

Panther Fan.

I really enjoyed the humour in this story.

So many treat sex so seriously; your story is like a breath of fresh air.

I'm very happy I decided to start reading some of your stories. I was hoping you would write stories with the same sort of humor and you didn't disappoint. I'm really impressed and hope you continue writing so I've got more to read. Bravo!

You did one hell of a job. Loved the humor in your story. THAT is so rare around here.

I loved the verbal play and the imagery

Very good writing

Wit is sexy.

Love the humor

It reminded me of a time when my wife asked me why I hummed durring sex.

I told her it was to set up a steady rythym.

She asked... Yes, but does it have to be "Row, Row, Row your boat?"

I look forward to more of your stories.

I could always make my wife laugh herself into an orgasm by singing the 'Anvil Chorus" during our lovemaking. It is the perfect rhythm!

I loved the humour, tension, and romance. not a combination found often enough.

thank you.

Easily one of my favorite stories. I would love to read more about these characters.

Loved it! Very funny. Good writing as well as a good story. Cheers!

Was actually a really good story until their last conversation after they finished, ruined the spell the rest of the story weaved. 3, could be a 5 if you edit the end.

This had me in stitches. Great story!

Superb story, mad storytelling skills and a powerful string of images. Hot sex AND character growth. Wow. Very well done. I wish there was an extra star for efforts like this.

You still need a proof reader. "Defiantly." And an affirmative remark is "YEAH." When your team scores points the word is "YEA!"

Love the story the sarcasm was perfectly balanced and it had an engaging story line. It was amazing

Excellent.

Excellent dialogue and the benefits were delightful. I have to agree with an earlier comment, a proofreader with a good command of the English language would improve it. 5 Stars!

I loved the dialogue in this one. Action made me wet but the dialogue was just as lively. Keep writing!

This was sooo good. Building Aaron up - sexy wit, integrity, being grounded, maturity - just made me want a bite of him, too. Can we get more fun steamy scenes with this couple, please? Can we get more of Aaron? I’ll do anything (almost).

Rather crude. No redeeming values.3

This was soon cool! Great humor, great sex, very well written, loved it!!!

Great premse.

But -- to start -- you need an editor. Wrong words. Missing words.

And the dialog is all wisecracks.

The sex, when it happens, happens much too matter-of-factly. Not nearly as erotic as it could have been. And needed more teasing.

Four stars.

Very nice. Really enjoyed it.

Loved Arrons character and would like to read more of him. Liked Branna and the sister too. What about a spin-off? Please...?

Fun read.