All Comments on 'Butterfly Effect'

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

Men scared of powerful women so they have to write about taking control of them. Get a life, women and men are equal whether you like it or not.

I didn't need to read anything more than the title and teaser line to know I would enjoy this story. The story itself, however, was more delicious than expected. You have a wonderful written voice, and I hope you'll continue to write for Lit. You would be sorely missed if you stopped.

The person who's all upset about male control needs to get a life. I actually have more stories about women dominating or controlling men than the other way -- just haven't gotten to post them yet.

Interesting story about husband and wife relationships. Well told with a flair. I liked the part about the butterfly.