All Comments on 'By the Bay Ch. 11'

No!!

Great update, can't wait for more!

hurry up with the next chapter!

good update! Can't believe anita kissed him though! But I guess I can understand why. Really hope she doesn't say yes to be married to him! What would jay do without her????

Its bin so long and u leave us with just 2 pages AND a cliffhanger! Thats just mean!... :) Cant wait for more. This was perfection. Laxmy.

Hug, maybe. Kiss, definitely not. Some of her choices frustrate me. I understand that you have a busy life but the story is losing steam (for me) with the long waits. I would prefer that you take the time to write a few chapters before you return, so that we won't have to wait a long time between chapters. I don't mind long waits but I do appreciate regular posting. Whatever you decide to do, I'll still be looking out for the next chapter.

MORE?!?!

I rarely comment but this story invoked such emotions in me that I would like to thank the author for blessing us with this story, I personally think it deserves a higher vote score as it is a great story but peoples tastes differ and I can assure you this is my sort of spice (cheesy i know) The only thing I can critisize about the story is Anitas kiss I have to agree with some of the previous posts, kissing is considered cheating and Anita is not that sort of girl,it makes her not very likable and as a reader you wouldn't connect as much with her after that action.Then again if Anita realises what a stupid mistake that was all can be forgiven as she just wanted to soothe Samis pain for a second.I beg you please continue this story its simply amazing

Are you not going to continue this story, Lily? Sigh... I wish you'd come back and post some more. Miss seeing this story develop and miss you too! :(

Please give us some new chapters! Soon!

This is such a great story it needs to be finished

can be happy with Jay, now her uncle comes back and wants to marry her though he is already married-the nerve of anyone to do this to someone that they claim to love.

I hope that she does not give in, back then he did not want her enough to marry her, now she has someone-if for a little while that has feelings for her and "still loves her and desires to marry her!"

She needs to tell him to step and live his life with his 1st choice wife and five daughters!