All Comments on 'Cacus Ch. 02'

Great story so far, keep up the good work.

great story so far. love to see where it goes, and what Cacus does with the magic scrolls.

not bad it is based on another story i have read but all the same differant then the other good work

This is the start of what I believe to be a great story tell me there is a chapter 3

Not enough features in characters - they all act like robots.

This is a really good story, so I hope you find the energy to write more.

I am amazed by the details, you have a great imagination.

Thanks for sharing your fantasy. ;)