All Comments on 'Caitlin'

It would be hotter if he would cum inside of them. Making them both pregnant and both his loving sex slave. Working around the house naked & making out with them both at anytime. Amber's tits would become larger also.

That was very hot story hopefuly you put ch. 02 thanks cfh

Now THAT is what I call the prototypical Literotica horndog fantasy. One amazingly lucky stud getting it on with two equally amazing sexy sluts, who think God broke the mold when he made this guy. Total, unquestioning, devotion and LUST. Yeppers...fantasies don't come no better than this one!

That was great! And thanks for pointing out that some guys really do like small tits!

I loved your story very much. excellent style and plot

THATIS ONE LUCKY BASYERD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

good but i only gave it a 50 because you never finished the story it would have got a 75-100 if it had been finished properly

So sexy!

I liked your tale of a girl showing her friend what she has already has even though its her brother. Dirk now has two girls that love him and both are cock hungry sluts. I would like you to continue this and the life and obstacles they face.

unfinished and the wannabe writer couldn't even keep the names staight he kept mixing up amber and cait. needs a rewrite and a good editor then it will be worth a vote but not until then.

Guess he can forget about having a girlfriend and a finding a wife is definitely out of the question, she seems like she wouldn't tolerate any competition

Loved it bunches!! Great job and thanks! :)

I would love to read a sequel. Please write more it was wonderful.

Yeah, I'm feeling a little bit let down that you didn't follow up with more to this story. Dirk needs to cum inside of Caitlin and she needs to have an orgasm when she feels it . 4/5

Story written in 2005. Author/s first story in 2002. Latest was in 2019. I think there are multiple authors that writh in the multiple genre, with varying quality throughout the story list. I'm guessing an assignment or some type of exercise?

To the last "anonymous",

No, not an assignment. I just publish here what I can't sell elsewhere. That, and I write mainstream stuff as well.

To all the others,

As an author, sometimes I feel that a story is complete all in itself. This was one of them. He got two girls to fall in love with him. To write more would take it from being eroticism to just being voyeuristic repetition. While I HAVE written sequels to many of my stories, I don't always publish them unless they both add to the story line AND meet my own standards. Just like in movies, sometimes the sequel just isn't as good as the original, and I hate letting my readers down.

That's not a Beach Boys song. It's Surf City by Jan and Dean.

Loved it!

Too over the top to seem realistic.

I prefer small breasts too, by the way....

This story failed to arouse me...sorry...