All Comments on 'Cajun Spice Ch. 04'

Between your references to God, too many characters like a bar scene, no story developement and putrid writing, there was one good thing.....THE STORY WAS SHORT so that the torture of reading it was lessened.

If you want to improve, just leave the page blank. How any one can write that much and end up with nothing is beyond belief!

I really like this story and cant wait for the next chapter.

The chapter was good but had too much emphasis on sex please try to incorporate more of the plot into each chapter so that we can go along with it

I really like your story so far. Last chapter was a bit short..I wonder who April will pick out of the sisters. By the way, don't listen to those jerks with the bad reviews. If they don't like your story, they don't have to continue reading it. I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Stacy