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"Like hell!"
"I literally ran into her on the elevator the day she arrived, so yes, I saw her first," Jasmine's voice defensive.
Jade's eyes narrowed as she glared at her sister. "Back off, Jasmine. She's taken," her voice a serious warning. Then she pushed past her sister and headed for the stairs.
Jasmine watched her sister stalk off down the hallway. "Yes, she is," Jasmine said under her breath, her voice possessive. Jade never heard her.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI really like your story so far. Last chapter was a bit short..I wonder who April will pick out of the sisters. By the way, don't listen to those jerks with the bad reviews. If they don't like your story, they don't have to continue reading it. I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Stacy
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThe chapter was good but had too much emphasis on sex please try to incorporate more of the plot into each chapter so that we can go along with it
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI really like this story and cant wait for the next chapter.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoBetween your references to God, too many characters like a bar scene, no story developement and putrid writing, there was one good thing.....THE STORY WAS SHORT so that the torture of reading it was lessened.
If you want to improve, just leave the page blank. How any one can write that much and end up with nothing is beyond belief!
