All Comments on 'Calgon, Take Me Away!!!'

Why is it that when wives cheat we call it "loving wives", but when the husband cheats, it's called "erotic coupling" ? Anyway, well written.

Please don't leave this story hanging. I thought better of you.

I wrote this story years ago for a friend, just because she asked and just to see if I could. It wasn't until Badge of Betrayal came out that anybody even bothered to read, vote or comment on this one! LOL!

I take back the nice things I said to you about your other story...well...maybe I don't. I hope to see a conclusion to this, because...well...

Firstly, you did write a nice erotic scene even if it was spoiled by that lack of proper placement, namely this story should be in loving wives. It did have an erotic coupling but it was tainted by the fact your "hero" is a cheating so and so. Is he a police officer? Seems you like to have your heroes be cheaters. :-) LOL

Other than the cheating aspect you wrote a very erotic tale. I wonder if you were doing this on purpose to create a little stir in the loving wives group? The like to latch on to cheating stories like rabid hyenas! The arguments are legendary and the language...? Less than genteel. :-) So, good job on the story...personally the lead should have his balls kicked and divorced for adultery but thats just me. :-)

Sincerely, Payenbrant.

LoL

Take this bitch - oopps

Here baby enjoy this - I will never hurt you - oopps

There, there honey you know I love you and will respect you in the morning - oopps

He sucks! - She sucks!!

The story read well and is nicely done - you write well and it makes one think -

Thanks - he seems to have no moral compass and is happy believing the world is as bad as he is - typical of a cheater right? The crash will be interesting along with the burn.