All Comments on 'The Call of the Wife Ch. 01'

I love reading about women especially wives that finally let themselves go. Brought back some memories of when my wife let herself finally realize the difference in having sex and making love.

This is awful, repetitive - she's so hot, hot, hot. C cups - juvenile. "Sun" and "wife" are not proper names or titles and are not capitalized. "A little patch of grass less than 20 by 20" - "twenty feet by twenty".

The whole first long page has absolutely no dialogue. You just tell us what you and she say. Write it out. The dialogue on the second page only concerns fucking.

"It was bigger than any cock she'd ever seen" and " She was about to come just listening to them talk to her this way." - how do you know? Amy has no personality at all.

What a whore! Great story.

There's a little lead-in to this evolution, but that's a pretty intense turn for one day. That said... that was an excellent turn!

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