All Comments on 'Cameron's Detention'

Love the story, especially the build up! Great idea for a work of fiction....NOT so cool in real life. You're good at this....keep it up, please!

Or, as they say some places, fifteen will get you twenty

Nice character development - a couple of comments (favorable) on the defloration scene. Our virgin was not multi-orgasmic (as seems to be the case in most virgins whose cherries get copped on this list) and her ravisher did not find her hymen some inches inside her vagina (as is almost always the case in Literotica, although nowhere else)

A nit to pick: the teacher keeps a condom in his wallet. If he keeps that wallet in his back pocket the heat and pressure will reduce the effective life expectancy of the condom to a few months, and possibly less. Or, on the other hand, if he is active none would stay unused very long. Inside jacket pocket is safer and less obvious -

A reply to H.H:

I agree with you on most of what you said about the author's story. Only complaint: There are some virgins that do have a hymen a couple inches in- reason: they have shallow uteruses and are known to be very tight throughout their life.

I knew this girl who couldn't get a dick into her- it was a very slow process and then when it was over there was so much blood (like a murder scene). Good thing though: she still is as tight as when she was a virgin.

Author: Loved the story, I have no complaints.

hoping for more.

I loved ramp up; I found the Police tune Don't Stand So Close To Me playing in my mind. The story nearly mirrors a gal I knew way back when, but not the situation. If we consider physical reality in fiction, I think we lose sight of our goal. I liked the author's omission of "cherry details" which is far more the norm among virgins. Once again, great story; I'm going to have a look for more CC titles.

Didn't much care for the ending.

Thank you.

Such a good story!