All Comments on 'Camping with Chelsea'

Excellent story - I loved every minute it.

Technically good too, with only minor mistakes. But the story was hot!

I hope Taylor and Lisa have plenty of time to be together alone to themselves. It would be great if mom went home with a little package in her womb. Thanks .....Rich

That was a good story. I enjoyed the story because of the mother and the boyfriend having fun in the morning. The scene in the tent was good and good descriptive words were used. It was a hot story.

I think been nice when g/f mom was sucking Tayor cock that he gave her a load OVER ass fucking her or both..

I hope Tayor get's a 3some out of it.. waiting for chapter 2

Its a good story so far. I didnt really like the anal part, let alone her sucking him off after it, but thats just cause thats not my thing. Anyways the rest of it was really really good. Im looking foward to part two. 4/5

I can't wait to read more!!

If i was her daughter and I found out she was screwing my boyfriend who I was in love with I would have killed her. What kinda of mother does that and thinks that all of a sudden he's hers and can't let her daughter have him?

Nice start to a possibly good story.It would be nice to have the adventure to continue for at least the end of the camping trip.Better if it last past the camping trip;in my personal opinion.But like the old saying goes;opinions are like a-hole,everyone has one.

Hope you continue the adventure.

Anonymous, posted 02/24/11

To be continued?

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Yeah, when I see 'to be continued' and then see the entry date of the story.... Sigh.

This published version is turning two years soon, without second part. The author posted one more story and then disappeared.

The author writes relatively well in comparison to the majority of amateur authors so it would be nice to see how the story evolves. Please write/publish the second part.

A good story but I want the next chapter and apparently it's not gonna to happen.

new member ,one of the few stories i've read,can not wait to read the rest of it,as me all wet thinking of what's coming

Great story as it's very stimulating as far as you went however, the theme has so much potential for many more chapters while on the camping trip and at home. Do write more if you still writing?????

mother daughter cum sluts.

Time to get the hubby involved for a hot time as well

Beautiful story, definitely needs a few more chapters, please make Lisa carry Taylor's baby, that would be so kinky.

Thank you for a deliciously kinky story.

Sarah Leather, London England.

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Loved it, can't wait for the rest!

This isnt incest. Fucking her daughters boyfriend makes her a bad mom and a slut wife, but its not incest unless they are related to each other. This belongs in the slut wives category, or the cuckold category, not here.

This story belongs in the( Loving Wives) section, he fucked her (Mothers) ass, and will gradually fuck her tight pussy, and cum in the (Mothers pussy). Hopefully she's on the pill, if not he will be supporting the (Mothers baby from him, that's what I'm hoping for, for both (Mother and Daughter to both get pregnant, and for( Taylor's father to say you impregnated both the mother and daughter)? Good story! I rated this story a (4) because of no pregnancy yet!